this is getting freakier by the second...but i love it!

...dude i think...my brain just fell out of my eye sokets...because of this...thing...DUDE YOU FIRED MY BRAIN IT BURNS...

hahaha.
i kinda wanted to hear about gaaras team... oh well. lol.
i still love it.
ur story makes me smile. XD

i totally agree with ARS02, or whatever they're called on the 5/10 years later thing.

That could have worked so much better than an uber short summary for the ending. You know?

hey! I like Choji!

Hve to agree with the fangirls, yaoi rules! I

Sorry bout all the mistakes comments.

I appreciate it when people tell me my mistakes so I can fix them, but I'll stop if you dont like it.

Sorry again

Cat
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more of them calling him naruto

jus thot id let u no

hi

sorry to point out the mistakes, but everyone called in-didguise Naruto, Naruto. And I'm pretty sure he was meant to be Kiba.

Also, in the wee funny bit at the end, you said you wanted to see what snape would do, and it was slughorn.

and apparently snape was patrolling the corridors, but i thot he wasnt a teacher cos he killed dumbledore...

hope it helps

HAHAHAHAHAHA THE FORCE! "There can only be one!" LOL LOL LOL

Cool story, but you need to watch yourself. You have Ginny calling Naruto, Naruto instead of Kiba like their undercovernames are supposed to be. Other than that good.

opps don't they know sasuke as neji? - enjoyable though

OMFG! YOU PERV! YOUR MORE OF A PERV THAN MY FREIND! AND HE WROTE A ** STORY WITH ME IN IT! AND IM ONLY 13! but other than that it was-as ron woul put it-WICKED AWSOME!

Oh Your God! UKE Sasuke! YAY!
like, i so thought you were goin' ta' make Naruto uke!
i luv you! more uke Sasuke!
if Naruto was uke i would'a stopped readin' an' looked for a HP/Naruto story with Uke-Sasuke, but know am happy!
i finly found a HP/Naruto story with a uke Sasuke!

luv you lots, from a crazy yaoi fangirl

the ending is too short! want more! But, GREAT story!