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| R.K. 2006-07-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseOne of my favourite pairings~ Perhaps you can explore into the idea "death of shuichi's gf caused a change in his character" mentioned in the manga. I like your fic~ Do continue! |
| SN 1987A 2006-05-28 ch 2,  | abuseAnother short chapter! XD But this chapter contains more seriousness than the first. Is the Boss really only between twenty-five and thirty? What a young boss for the Organization. x) Or did he take APTX too? And the woolly hat that Shuichi always wears! It's a very nice explanation that you came up with! And I thought he wore a hat because he's bald. XD Is it Akemi? Pink umbrella for Ran...LOL. |
| kris 2006-05-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseyay u update again umm why would the boss kill the B.O. then create a new one? |
| kris 2006-05-18 ch 1, anon. | abusenice intro its so mysterious pls update soon |
| SN 1987A 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuse-squeals- I love this, I love this, I love this! XD (I don't know how I got sugar-high, but I definitely feel that way.) I don't know if this was your intention, but I kept reading humor in between lines. It's like the story is some sort of comedy hidden behind seriousness (could be because I'm giddy right now so everything sounds funny to me...) Moriarty of the twenty-first century! FS has coined a new term! I can almost hear The Boss say, "Take that, Holmes of the twenty-first century!" I've just read what you've posted on the forum not too long ago, and I'm really surprised you already have the story up! I'm definitely waiting for the rest of this story (and of course, the other stories as well!) |
| Clamowamo 2006-05-18 ch 1, | abuseWith you being a very, very good writer and this being my favorite pairing... I'm absolutely psyched about the next chapter. :) |