  Magical Meerkat 2008-02-23 . chapter 1Short, but it worked, very very well |
| jonasbrosluvr13 2006-05-23 . chapter 1 aw |
| Mariana 2006-05-21 . chapter 1 Your story make`s me want a boyfriend. |
| Elizabeth Theresa 2006-05-19 . chapter 1 Nice job. |
| Erkith 2006-05-18 . chapter 1 nice but too short! leaves me wanting more! |
| Charlee B. 2006-05-18 . chapter 1 Fantastic. It is the best way to describe his love for her!! |
| Rommie03 2006-05-18 . chapter 1 I really believe you have story potential here. I like it. |
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