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Golly.

Good job, generally. Narration, content, grammar and spelling, is good.

Keep it up!

He he, random bits of humor. I like it.

You know, you seem to be as random as your stories...which is awesome. I liked the whole Auron's not dead and comes walking out of the smoke/flames...funny. This story had alot of laughs...sad it had to come to an end though. Good Job as always.

Liked the message at the end so I'll leave a review...hehe I liked this chapter alot for some reason. I don't know why though. I really enjoyed it when Tidus had the cactuar dance around Auron and then joined him. Wow Tidus has it coming...well loved the chappy.
bluemoon fairy

Tidus...liked the chapter. And I was suprised at how smart Tidus seemed to get. Well until the end part there...he's still as dumb as ever. I loved how all of the cactuar were trying to give Lulu flowers...hehe. Good job!

10,0 Gil a review eh? It's worth it, but I better get my own Summoner after paying, especially after that skin flake I nearly choked on with whatever that stew was ;)

I'm mildly shocked that Tidus developed some brain cells in this edition, but it's a nice change and the group reaction (and my own reaction to it too) brings the humour. While I don't think this is as funny as your other random bits, it is still very amusing and brought a smile to my face (especially the Cactuar on a stick).

Nice work.

Hey. And so another "Random Bits" draws to a close. Very funny bits. It was full of humorous, laugh-out-loud moments. I, uh, liked it better than 4. Thanks for writing it, looking forward to the next one.

Ok, I'll help. *Vaguely hears 'cha-ching' sound.* Not interested in the cactuars though. Can I have one of those monkey things that run around the Calm Lands, Zanarkand, Djose, and Kilika? Anyway, I LOVE Random Bits! "Wanna chip?"

Pacd du oy (Best to ya),

Kitsu.

Now I'm not sure I should leave a review, but what the hell! Haha, one of many old handyman tricks-use gum and gum wrappers. Finally, radios are back. So are the Cactuars.

Best to ya,

Kitsu.

It seems Tidus is the king of annoyance in this story and its very funny!
LOL! Wakka's thick skull has actually become useful for once (no offense!) and cactuars dancing, aw! Cute!
Now, to see Tidus dance with coconuts on him, BRA HA HA HA! My friend would probably want to see it as well, but for a slightly different reason.
These 'Random Bits' stories are hilarious!

HA HA HA! That was so hilarious and random, yet grammatically correct! Very well done! So hard to find a fic that is funny yet well-written at the same time, so this is a rare find!!

Ah, you are SUCH a good author. I LOVE Random Bits. Hey, if I miss chapters, it's 'cause I finally found myself a life, sorry. (I loved the female villagers theory. At least Lu didn't get mad for the man-handling and actually CAST Fira.) God, the mental images (The real story and Fira) are just so PERFECT.

Pacd du oy (Best to ya),

Kitsu.

Hey. I sputtered at the first sentence (of the story, not your travails). And I kept laughing throughout. This was funny and original. Really nice.

Ha ha! Very nice! Very, very funny!