 5540 2006-05-18 . chapter 1Yeah...I'm sure how I got here but anyway...O.o
[This is more publicity for Albel’s ownership of Fayt] You definitely accomplished this!
This fic is very well written;
but the POV changes w/o warning, which makes it a bit hard to follow...
[1st Person Fayt, 1st Person Albel then 3rd Person]...its a little unclear at times.
At the end I realized this is after the hotel scene, which is why I *heart* the Albel/Fayt.
I did call it Fayt/Albel but as soon as I read this I changed it the other way!
You should continue this fic! |