that was SO funny! And VERY realistic too! I love-love-love M/M fics.

I love this. It's VERY realistic. And, Maureen's so...I don't know how to say it. Forceful, horny, but also kind, maybe? Reading a story like this, I kind of expected her to rip into Mark like hedge clippers if her first time sucked. But she was very wild and cool about the whole thing. And Mark was perfect. Very cool story.

That was FUNNY. The last line absolutely made my night!

Hahaha. That was cute. I liked it. Are you going to add on to it?

AHH! This is hysterical! HAHAHA! I love it!

just take your pants back off... thats somthing id LOVE to say to mark...

I don't think I ever laughed so hard in my life ... my favorite part was them reading it out of a book. Maureen's my hero! "Take your pants off; I don't give up that easily." That was classic!

That was hilarious... a perfect interpretation of what their first time might have been like. They were so in character, too! Of course Maureen doesn't give up and Mark doesn't know what condoms to buy! Great Job!

Completely hilarious. And your Maureen is just as I imagine her, horny and domineering as always. And thank you for not having her tie him up with the scarf. That is way overdone.

Very clever! I enjoyed it.

Haha...totally a MM story...love it!

WOHHA! GO MARKY!

Raunchy yet stylish. And completely believable, that Mark would give up so soon and Maureen would pressure him into trying again.

Amusing. I love it. Mark and Maureen are SO in character that it's amazing! Keep up the great writing!