Chibikinesis 2002-10-15 . chapter 5I'm soooo anxious to know what happens! It's got my favorite couple (sighs happily) *finally someone besides me thinks that Aeris & Vincent should get married & raise a lil' family...* did I type that...?(blush) |
Angelic Demon20 2002-05-15 . chapter 2I'm reviewing this right now because I plan on reading the rest of it later. I wanted to thank you for the review that you gave me also on my fic, by the way.
This is really good so far. Intriguing, caught my attention. Just it... confuses me. You seem to switch between past and present tenses... Thus sometimes confusing the reader, (me anyway. LOL.) Some grammer mistakes too. *grins* I know, I'm mean. But don't take it the wrong way. I'm gonna read the rest of it later.
I'm also wondering how Aeris came back. Maybe you should come up with a way for that to have happened. I dunno, would be interesting to know. Anyways, I'm gonna shut up now. |
Maya H 2002-03-12 . chapter 5Awww man!! I loved the story so much but it ended right here.I urge you to continue!!!! If you read this review please be aware that I'm waiting for you to continue with another chapter.I loved the story since the beginning I wanna know what happens next.If you get to finish good luck!!! |
URUQuai15 2001-07-24 . chapter 4 DAAAAAAaaaaaaaaang ittttt!!! another cliffhanger!!! ooo.... lee has silver hair?? could he be Sepiroth's son?? hmm... this is getting interesting... Write more!! cool fic! |
Tla Adagaue 2001-07-23 . chapter 1I'm getting into this story. Keep writing ^_^ |
MitsuiJr 2001-06-02 . chapter 2^^ Kewl! |
Quinctia 2001-05-28 . chapter 2This is sounding pretty interesting...I think. *scratches head* I'm immensely confused at some things. I can understand a few typos, but...Aeris is the character from the game, and Aries is the Greek god of war. So, yeah, I'm not getting a good mental picture. X_x And why isn't Aeris...umm...dead? Also, since you are using the Anglicized (okay, that's a big word...it means "converted to English") names for the characters, why are their children all named (I'm assuming) Japanese names? It just seems a little...odd. Maybe it's just me, I don't know. Hehe...and one more thing. I doubt Reno would ever, EVER tell Yuffie not to say "damn." (Oh, and Barret's daughter is Marlene...) I think I'm done... *screams as the spork mob carries her away* |
FinalFantasy7Girl 2001-05-27 . chapter 1it was great! |
Raspberry Cube 2001-05-27 . chapter 1I like ^-^ |
Ah-choo 2001-05-26 . chapter 1 Wow. I wish I could leave class like that! Good story! |