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blklover 2008-10-26 . chapter 8
please write more update soon
pstibbons 2007-05-04 . chapter 8
I enjoyed reading this. It was a bit snapshottish.

I can understand the motivations for H/D but not H/Ron. Ron's not good enough for Harry or Hermione.
pstibbons 2007-05-04 . chapter 7
Using the same guests when the pairings at the ball were so different... doesnt make sense at all. I liked the changed pairings, dont get me wrong. I just dont understand why this had to remain the same.
pstibbons 2007-05-04 . chapter 6
Curious as to why you had Hermione display skepticism about Harry's entry into the tournament. I'm restraining myself quite magnificently from clobbering you ...

How did Harry learn the summoning charm?

Why didnt he use his alchemist powers all the way?

Poor dragon.

Sod Off is worse than ** Off? Thought they were at the same level, and both below ** Off. I'll take your word for it though; I only grew up in the Commonwealth, not in Britain.
pstibbons 2007-05-04 . chapter 4
Ron laughed, “If I didn’t understand, what kind of friend would that make me?”

The real Ron's obviously in a trunk somewhere. Ditto the real Molly, if she allowed H & Hr to share a bed under her roof (even if Hermione's parents approve).

As to fourteen year old sex... I remember a joke made on the 99p Challenge... "Members of the St Edmunds Church Knitting Club are invited to a lecture/demonstration on the effect of viagra on 14 year old boys. Umbrellas will be provided."

Go Peter Granger! For standing up to Amos.
pstibbons 2007-05-04 . chapter 3
A bit surprising that Ron was the only person to bet on HHr ... at least that gets rids of all the triangle angst.
Soren Aurion 2006-12-07 . chapter 1
On the pairings issue: Go for it. Like you said, it's a lot more realistic than yaoi (Harry/Draco?! Who comes up with these ideas?!). Just keep writing well.
smartywitch 2006-10-27 . chapter 2
i think it is kinda wrng because:
1) they are only like 13 years old(hermione might be 14, I think... but Harry is still 13)
2) wouldn't Hermione's parents care??
3) the whole bath thing is realy weird
i think that they are hardly "lovers", or, rather, shouldn't be at the age of THRITEEN... it is just wrong.
firestorm69 2006-09-24 . chapter 8
well I just found this story and it seems to be a good story. I actually enjoy it so keep up the good writing and hope to see more HP stories with H/Hr as the couple from you soon.
vaders.bane 2006-07-09 . chapter 8
Very interested in seeing the last story. I will be watching.

S.
miroku-has-darkness 2006-07-05 . chapter 8
i'm listening to the War on drugs by the barenaked ladies and it's such a perfect song to read the end with but if you don't mind can it be more than just a triogy like all the rest of the years (i'm sure the seventh book will be out by the time you get to it) then have a side story of them after the war but maybe i'm being selfish by wanting it like that but i can't wait for the PoD
miroku-has-darkness 2006-07-04 . chapter 7
it's the prefect's bath but who cares anyway i don't really like the whole second titles thing but anyway update soon
miroku-has-darkness 2006-06-28 . chapter 6
i like swear words a little better but you can't win all the time
miroku-has-darkness 2006-06-24 . chapter 5
I see that this story is done from the profile that's awesome but how will incorporate ed into the sequal
miroku-has-darkness 2006-06-15 . chapter 4
Have a reporter catch them with a picture and have it on front page news but you still never answered my question will ed ever come back into the story
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