Good chapter. Good story.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Good chapter. Love the story so far.

gunny

Good chapter.

gunny

Interesting start.


gunny

please write more update soon

I enjoyed reading this. It was a bit snapshottish.

I can understand the motivations for H/D but not H/Ron. Ron's not good enough for Harry or Hermione.

Using the same guests when the pairings at the ball were so different... doesnt make sense at all. I liked the changed pairings, dont get me wrong. I just dont understand why this had to remain the same.

Curious as to why you had Hermione display skepticism about Harry's entry into the tournament. I'm restraining myself quite magnificently from clobbering you ...

How did Harry learn the summoning charm?

Why didnt he use his alchemist powers all the way?

Poor dragon.

Sod Off is worse than ** Off? Thought they were at the same level, and both below ** Off. I'll take your word for it though; I only grew up in the Commonwealth, not in Britain.

Ron laughed, “If I didn’t understand, what kind of friend would that make me?”

The real Ron's obviously in a trunk somewhere. Ditto the real Molly, if she allowed H & Hr to share a bed under her roof (even if Hermione's parents approve).

As to fourteen year old sex... I remember a joke made on the 99p Challenge... "Members of the St Edmunds Church Knitting Club are invited to a lecture/demonstration on the effect of viagra on 14 year old boys. Umbrellas will be provided."

Go Peter Granger! For standing up to Amos.

A bit surprising that Ron was the only person to bet on HHr ... at least that gets rids of all the triangle angst.

On the pairings issue: Go for it. Like you said, it's a lot more realistic than yaoi (Harry/Draco?! Who comes up with these ideas?!). Just keep writing well.