I think we need more DreamxOC stories around here.This is one of the few, and I LOVE it(I love vampires, too).

dream does use contractions. try "the doll's house." he uses plenty of them.

it's very nice that you're making an effort to preserve the characters' voices, but remember that DOESN'T mean recycling words and phrases from the canon.

i wish you'd spent more time describing to us what Drusilla was like, that this new incarnation would still love her so.

I had a dream once...didn't end so happy...there were storms and all my flowers died...

Sweet *Chews on the pink cotton candy like fluffiness* You write a belevable character and I like the whole expanding on the jewel with it's facets thing. Carry on with your works as I am sure they are all good stuff!

I have read a great deal of neil gaiman's work andthis is by far, the closest story that I have read to his own style while at the same time it is your own.

In my opinal u should send a copy of thsi to Neil Gaiman himself and see what he thinks about it. Because I feel that u have a grasp of what Neil tryies to get us all to see and feel in his tales. And U have that falirthat I have seen in very few of the writers on the site so take pride in this pease.

i liked the whole series. it was sweet and beautifully written. normally i hate original characters, but this was cool. great job!

I liked it! As much as I loved the Sandman Comics, Morpheus was always too cold. It's nice to see him in a more relaxed view.

i liked it! i think maybe daniel was a bit TOO relaxed, especially in this chapter, but hey, there you go. a great story and i'm sad that it has come to an end. *dreamkin*

Yeah, it's corny...but it's also sweet. I thoroughly enjoyed this whole story. I look forward to seeing more of your work!

great cant write much haven't got much time - absolutely loved it glad to see you haven't lost the spark.

can't wait till part 5

love *dreamkin*

Wooh! An exciting conclusion...hehe. I love Thess. Thess and me get along quite well...and dammit, maybe I'll write my own sequel to A Game of Lives and hook Thess and Dream up. Herm...or not. But I love the advice Thess gives her.

Nuala rocks the casbah as well.

good stuff - glad to see your carrying on the tale in the grand style! now PLEASE don't leave it too late til the next episode, the 'eventually' does not bode well!

Keep going, I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Don't leave us in suspense!

hey great stuff! i think you captured Thassaly pretty well, and the fic ties in well withthe chronicles. one question - is there going to be any more?

What a tease. I'm glad that you finally added to this. :) Now, what happens next?