I really would like to see more of this fic. I also hope my nickname sugestion for Mirai Trunks was good. I really hope Tora stays in the present timeline.

Tora is a great nickname. It means tiger and its not to far off of Trunks japanese name, Torunksu.

This is really interesting, please continue it! Update soon please.

Interesting. Hm...update soon please

aww, you stopped at a good part! hope you update soon! to adopt a story and then leave it in the rain, how mean. XP

mako

Haha, I'm on a mad hunt for Future Trunks' time travel mishaps fics. I found one that took place in the very beginning of DBZ when Vegeta and Nappa first arrived and now I found this one, a GT version! I'm also working on one, which takes place at very end of DBZ when present Trunks is 18... *hint, hint*

Anyways! I like how this story is going. You're a good writer, lots of details and explanations that doesn't leave things utterly vague. I'm interested in seeing how 27 y.o. Trunks will react when he meets "future" Trunks... what would his age be at this point? Early twenties? And of course, more chances of father-son bonding time with Vegeta, haha. Well, can't wait to read more so update soon! :)

Nice Story! pls. update

This is a excellent chapter update.

Hey there! This is very interesting. I wonder how this is all going to come together, with Mirai Trunks on the run with the time machinge and Trunks from the other timeline running Capsule Corps. Personally, I think you should stick with leaving it as Mirai Trunks. It helps to keep the confusion about who is speaking down. Please Update Soon!

honestly, i think you should just stick with mirai trunks. that way, there won't be any questions as to who is talking. this is looking to be much grimer than i had at first thought, and i really like it, but i still hope you do allow for trunks to bring his mother back.

Hey, this is a awesome fic! Poor Trunks...his mother is murdered, and when he goes out for revenge, he is then labeled a murderer with out even being able to defend his own point of judgement!

Argh! What a predicament! ^_^

Though, I am not sure how Trunks is going to be able change his own timeline. Every other time that he has gone back in past with the time-machine, he ended up in the alternate universe that's not his own. But I am anxious to see where this goes and what will happen in the next chapter!

Continue to Update!

i like it!
o you must updated!
:D