that was good. are you going to update it?

Awesome chapter! The way ya showed Hectors feelings and thoughts during this scene really made it your own even though it's a scene we already saw in the movie.

Great job! Can't wait till ya update.

Creative. I don't think I've read a story like this before. I'm really glad I found it.

I never thought of a H/H pairing before but you pulled it off really well. You're doing a good job so far, please continue.

good chapter, this story is coming along nicely. i really liked the bit "Now, of all times in his life, Paris tries being heroic in front of me—with this woman that he abducted in the middle of the night." it was fantastic, a great bit of adaption to the movie.

please update as quickly as you can, i'd like to read more!

I always wanted someone to write a fic about this pairing! Thank you so much and keep up the good work!

Excellent, excellent, this story is coming along nicely. :) Apart from a couple of errors; presents - 'presence' and roamed *laughs* (I found that hilarious!) - 'wronged' it was very good. *Squeals* Oh I'm desperately awaiting some more dialogue & action between Hector & Helen! *Eyes light up* And thankyou hun for the little inside joke at the start of your chappie *winks back knowingly* -nice to see.

Banshee Queen. :D

PLEASE write more

thanks,
jamie

I liked it. And yes I think you should keep writing!

Love it so far! Especially inpresed by how you described the scene from the movie! You're writing is wonderful, I thought that Hector would have fallen for Helen too, despite his marriage, if she was half as beautiful as the legends said. It was liked no one could resist her but him ;). Anyways, update soon! I can't wait to see where you go with this!

~Buggy~

very good! this is an excellent beginning, i really liked it. the description of Helen was great, you should definitely continue! please update soon, i'd love to read more!

Nicely done. *Smiles* There were a couple of spelling errors but apart from that it was quite good. I'm really looking forward to some dialogue though between our fav pairing through honey!! I wan't some Helen & Hector action!! Lol. Please post ASAP! *Tugs on SF's shirt frantically* :D

Banshee Queen.

P.S Thanks for the pics...:D