That was awesome!

My first time reading a asukakakuren fic.
:D
And I really liked it. Now I have a new pairing to look for!

:)

squee~
*die due of the cuteness*

Oh my.. aren't you writing any more?!?!
I want to read, please!!
More, more :D
Gab

That was interesting!

Uwah, I so do love your roleplay! Got hooked from the moment I set eyes on it. This fic is nicely written by the way, love kakashi's shyness and aloofness, Asuma's everpresent leer, and Kurenai feeling relaxed. I hope to join once i turn 14, or after I turn fourteen, at any rate. ANBU should be glomped and given cheesecake! Once again, nicely written! ^-^

That was a nice read. Pleasant, not too slow, enough detail without bogging things down. Good work.

K.D.

It's sweet, sensitive, and with a gentle, laid-back feel. I enjoyed it.

hahaha i love your stories!!
Kakashi's so cute ^_^

This is a really good story XD. I hope you're planning to write another chapter! I could picture everything happening, The braclets on Asumas wrists, and the dog like pakkun, so sly!

I REALLY REALLY like what you've got so far. It seems very promising and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ki this is SO perfectly captured! I loved Kakashi and the Carnie! "You'll have to try harder..." "Not really..." it's brilliant! And Asuma's bracelets! And Kurenai's curly hair. It was really just perfect．I could see that shabby little inn so perfectly, and the smile Kurenai gave to clear out the onsen. You have, as always, an astonishing touch. You're the best.

Wow! This was really well done. The way it builds, the way every sentence, every scene seems to be alluding to something bigger, something unsaid, but that they're all fully aware of. The proverbial "elephant in the room". And the most charming part; Kakashi doesn't seem to be sure if there even is an elephant, Kurenai's just the right blend of mystery and enabler, and Asuma is deliciously fully aware. This is really quite steamy, I can't wait to see it boil over...: )

(wibbles)

Oh, wow. Oh, wow oh /wow/. Kakashi was great, you did so well with him. And oh, and wow. And uh, wow. I can't think of much else to say, except it was so /smart/. I mean, a pug before Pakkun, and Asuma's heavy rings around his wrists, and /wow/.

(loves)