oh, that was so cool.

10/5 ^-^

aww! ^_^ that was so sweet, u almost made me cry, loved it, really...

Beautiful. Very poignant. A great one-shot.

I liked it. A little sad but good

I love the emotion in this. Really loved this. ^^

wow, that was really beaultiful. That's going straight to favorites. I love the way you write past and present together and everything just fits. One of the best I read in this entire site.

Oh wow... gorgeous and moving; you did an amazing job. I really loved it.

sweet

aw i almost started crying. it was simply beautiful. you did an amazing job writing it.

-sighs dreamily- interesting writing stlye but i like it

T.T Just...beautiful. Absolutely beautiful.

But, uh, aren't you missing some question marks and commas, or it the idiot ffn not letting people upload them again? Stupid ffn...

Aw! Your story almost made me cry... Touching. Love it.

sara

I loved this! The flow and emotion was just great... I hope you write more! :D

its very sad and well written.

Aw... That was so cute. -glomp-