aw X3 so cute gah i love this story X3 so romantic so sexual so so everything X3 u did a great job on this story X3

you just made me like a new yaoi pair! clap, clap, clap for you

omg dude i luv that story dude it was awsome so good nice job!

OMG! it was HOT! but like a Fluff! at the same damn time. awesome i'm glad this is one of the first KankuroShinoKankuro fics i've read. the end was adorable. kinda made me want to cry actually

lol u did a nice jobon this lmao but i found a mistake lmao srry if this afends u but here is your mistake lmao wen i said he pulled off his head lmao i think u ment head band right lmao its cool man it still made me happy in the pants O

I pushed his back against the shower wall, as I pulled off his sweater. He stud their looking at me. His hair was now hanging in his face. He pulled off his head and threw it out the shower. His sweater now met mine on the shower floor. I kissed down his chest as it was warm form the water. I kept going he made a noise letting me know it was good.

this is so good! u should write more or atleast another.

shino x kankuro is so cute 3

very nicely done

xx

Yea! Nice work, keep it up! _

CUTE! _ Horray for KanuroShino! I don't know why, but I like that couple. Anyway, nice job, but, here's a little constructive criticism: Your spelling is horrendous. Stood is not spelled stud, a stud is a boss, knob, nailhead, or other protuberance projecting from a surface or part. Yeah, that's my only complaint. Other than that I REALLY liked it!

That was awesome! XD

Loved all the detail.

But i got a little freaked out when it said "He pulled off his head and threw it out the shower." XD

But other than that, I think the rest was spelled right. XD

Angelas

OMFG pulled off his head! XD YAY! HAHAHAHA...shinos DEAD o.o

very well written...i normally don't enjoy these types of stories but this one was an exseption...good job

Yay! -glomps- I'm not the only one anymore! I'm writing a KankurouShino Fanfiction, too. I haven't really gotten too far into it yet, but, I'm getting there.

This was pretty good! Despite the spelling errors. I think you got Shino down pretty good! I like the idea of it. I think I'm going to go add chapter 5 to my story now. Bye!

Lovely story but this one part kind of scared me, "He pulled off his head and threw it out the shower." I read it and then had to reread the line to make sure I had read it right. But otherwise an amazing story. You have converted me to a ShinoKankuro fan!

The story was great.There needs to be more of this pairing.Forgive me if this critique sounds a little like a flame,it does not mean to be.

Anyways,the grammar and spelling were great,although you repeatedly misspelled "stood".The only problem I have with it is it's a bit too fast.Slow things down,and have more buildup.The idea of two guys meeting,talking to each other for about a paragraph,then suddenly falling in love and having sex is a little dry.Keep that in mind.

Once again,I apologize if I seem to be a little mean.I don't want to be!Other than those few comments,this was a greatly written story,and I hope to see more by you soon.Keep Writing!-LB