XDarkAngelOfLoveX wrote this story 3 days before you did you copy it? cuz its the exact thing word for word sorry but if you did that then you shouldve at least changed it just to let you know

it was beautiful

Haha I cried... =P Great story.

THAT WAS SO CUTE!AWW

Wow,
That was Sad yet Very Good!
I Loved it

THis was so touching... *sniffle* It was good, give yourself some credit! I really liked it!

aw it was so i mean wow oh i loved it a lot you deed to up date soon plz...

I love it please make it longer.

I would say good story but you didn't write it. You posted this story 3 days after XDarkAngelOfLoveX did. So from Process of elimination, I say you plagerised(sp?) her story. I'm gonna tell, that's illegal.

One word: Wow

I would like to say that there seems to be plagerizim going on because you and XDarkAngelOfLoveX have the EXACT SAME STORY! I will also inform XDarkAngelOfLoveX of this fact as well.

So sweet! very well written

Incredible. A true to the 'Feudal Fairytale' piece. I commend you, well done. Bravo!

-Anon. Out