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Isabella Simmons
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abuseIt's a really cool story. Writing stories is a really good way to learn English and you need a good bit of work on yet but keep up the good work.
Sneer
2008-07-19
ch 1,
abuselmao! oh...wow...
oa.Chrome
2008-07-09
ch 1,
abuseThis is the single greatest story ever written in the history of mankind.

EVER.
Suspicious Elipses
2008-07-06
ch 1,
abuse"I cant give you my lisense officer" :(
"Why not?"
"Because you are headcrab zombie!"

"Zombie goasts leave this place!"
"But this is our house" :(

"The contrysides were nice and the plants were singing and the birds and the sun was almost down from the top of the sky."

"...and the pants were dead..."

"It's a good day to do what has to be done by me and help my brother to defeat the enemys"

Gosh, I love you.
jimmycranberry
2008-06-11
ch 1,
abusethis... is... INCREDIBLE!

most fantastically random / retarded story ever written and it must go down in fanfiction history!
DrWolfeye
2008-06-10
ch 1,
abuseYou have inspired me to do everything real fast as everyones brother where they are.
Epic win(phail?!?!?)
RuinousEnergies
2008-06-05
ch 1,
abuseAnd then John was a zombie.
GoldenVeemon
2008-05-26
ch 1,
abuseOh my gosh I like that video version in Youtube of this story X'D Nice one!
ME R A MAN
2008-05-15
ch 1,
abuseThis was a brilliant work of art. You illustrated the character of John Freeman so greatly. He has now inspired me to do EVERYTHING real fast.
Dangerous Jade
2008-05-14
ch 1,
abuseAha. I'm laughing so hard, I can't breathe. Epic!
Abyssal1
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is just brilliant badfic! The accompanying video is an absolute masterpiece - I know itÅ› on You yube somewhere, but thereÅ› a link here.../blog/?p=16968
ManWithoutABody
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseSir, you are the master of comedy, and I take my hat off to you.
Mei Fire
2008-04-21
ch 1,
abuseYOU OWN THE INTERNET.

:D
Propaganda Session
2008-04-10
ch 1,
abuseQuote..."...and the pants were dead..."

New meme tiem.

CHRIST THE PANTS ARE DEAD!! GET IN DA CHOPPER!
Captain Crunchy Fingers
2008-04-07
ch 1,
abuseThis, as with all of squirrelking's stories, is a creative masterpiece. I personally believe that the author is faking the poor grammar/spelling/whatnot for comedic effect, and it works perfectly.

To all those that can't seem to enjoy this for what it is, and try to force it into a "serious fanfic" category, lighten up. These stories are some of the most entertaining and rewarding fanfics I've ever read.
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