 Sunday Wolf Song 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Love it! He's so sweet in this story, a side of Freddy we rarely see. Amazing job, grat character descriptions, I love everything about it!
-Sunday |
 CattyGothLoli 2009-06-15 . chapter 1I liked this side of Freddy. It was cute story. haha, Baby Jones. I coul picture him saying that, great job.^^ |
 obsessivee 2007-09-23 . chapter 1ha, yes, very sappy. but good! i loved it |
 PhelpstwinsandElftwins 2006-11-29 . chapter 1u made me cry how beautiful and ohmygod Freddy...crying thats a first lol also i adore What you least expect so yea ill go now |
 Emi_Weasley 2006-08-06 . chapter 1 Aw! I love Freddy.. I love cheesy fanfics.. I love school of rock..
I love this story! Great job!
Emi |
 Cupid's Bride 2006-07-14 . chapter 1Oh my God... that was AWESOME.
Freddy is so cute! "Baby Jones" I could totally picture him just saying that.
Hahahah. BTW, when you were talking about Summer being tone deaf... it reminded me how you said she had "pitch-perfect" in What You Least Expect. Actually, the term is "perfect pitch". And believe it or not, a person can have perfect pitch and still be tone deaf. I was in a community choir last summer, where there was this guy who can tell if I'm off-key... but can never tell he is, unless we tell him. We had to tell him to sing in a different key everytime. It worked. I think Summer's the same. Or maybe she's just plain tone deaf. Tee hee. Actually, it's ear training that's the biggest problem in a musician.
Enough of my blabbing. Love Letter was absolutely superb. It made me smile. I felt a "Nicholas Sparks" vibe in the beginning and throughout the letter... but that's just me.
Anyway, I hope you keep writing more Freddy/Summer stories! :-) One-shots are a good way to keep the ball rolling. Remember, an idea that may not fit in one fic will probably fit in another. :-) I actually do that, but I end up writing a whole new different series. I don't wanna post any WIP I have until they're finished! Go figure. I mean, if you check out my story "Inspire Me"? I am so mad at myself for not keeping it short and sweet. I am in the process of writing chapter 3. It is NOT fun.
Maybe I just need a refresher about School of Rock. Or maybe they need to make a sequel. *does the eyebrow wave* Now, if only what's-his-name will write it.
FREDDY/SUMMER ROCKS! *raises the goblet of rock* |
 ehmigawd rainbows 2006-06-20 . chapter 1Awe. =) Very very nice work. For a oneshot story.. probably the first i read, it was very well begun (began?) and ended. Begun is that that right word? I dunno. Ah well. I really liked it though. Short, sweet, happy. |
 CorruptedInk 2006-06-16 . chapter 1THAT WAS FREAKIN' AWESOME!
Believe it or not, I'VE handwritten scripts like this, fat full with the sappy factor too! Lol. I don't know why, but it seems to come most naturally, this style, and it's funnily satisfying at the end! Well done, excellent tones and descriptions! |
 silverbuggy 2006-05-29 . chapter 1I loved it!! But...why don't you add an extra chapter, so the baby could be born? You know, give a description of what the baby looked like, and what were Freddy's or Summer's afterthoughts!! Great Story!
Twilightwing ^.~ |
 promise.me.forever. 2006-05-24 . chapter 1aw that was really sappy. but in a good way. it was really good!! you should write more romance stories, i think you'd be really great at it! |
 Kisshu-luv 2006-05-23 . chapter 1I LUVIT! That's right, L-U-V, not L-O-V-E. LUV means WAY BETTER THEN LOVE ITSELF!! THIS MEANS IT'S INCREDIBLE! So keep that in mind, okay? Okay! ^-^ |
 sweetcaroline 2006-05-21 . chapter 1That was so cute! Incredibly cheesy, yes, but isn't incredibly cheesy good (most of the time). In this case, it was pretty excellent.
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 i am not a chipmunk 2006-05-21 . chapter 1 I loved that. Every single bit of it was beautifully written and sweet. That's all I'm going to say because I think if I continue to compliment this story, I may never stop. :) |
 writingrox12 2006-05-19 . chapter 1i luv this!! its so...i dont even have a word to describe it! but its absolutely amazing!! BRAVO! |
 Nanners-77 2006-05-19 . chapter 1Beautiful!
That was very elegantly written, and it depicted such an amazing picture. This has to be one of your best chapters. I loved every word, but especially (times one thousand) the last sentence. It fit so well to the story, and was so meaningful.
I loved how you made Freddy so sweet. It made me really happy that not everybody wanted him to be considered the **.
Anyway, I don't have anything to say that would involve criticism because it was brilliant. I am going to say that, ironically, I was planning on writing a similar story and haven't sat down to write yet...minus the baby and the letter, of course. I just hope mine is as good as yours! |