Great story. Loved the unusual premise.

can u add some romance?

Arghh! What?! Colin was involved!!

Interesting...Cameron. Hmm...new suspect! Update! I know *your* secret. Come on, hurry up, update now. You're so mean. :( I want more. This is kinda annoying. Oh by the way, great chapter! New clues, more suspense. Me want more. :)

This is great! Kind of amusing... I mean, I'm a fanfic writer but not 15 and not nearly that into it lol. It's kind of ironically funny. Please update soon!

Ooh! Interesting...frequent visits to the hospital...possibly getting beaten up by someone...! This is such a good story! Please continue with it. I can't wait till they speak to Joey. I want to know more. :( Bye!

Jay

PS. Thanks for dedicating this chapter to me! Go me! And thanks for that message of support concerning my chicken pox. :)

Hm...Who killed Hannah? I need to know. Colin sounds a bit like Wesley from Buffy. Obsessive, much? Only different coz I don't like him :(
Especially after the line 'not many of my affairs last longer than this anyway.'
Poor Hannah. I'm now waiting for the next chapter, eagerly.
Jay
PS. I went to the Convention Centre, however I did not find any Jodi Picoult books. I found that very distressing. :( I did however find a few books to read. There seemed to be a lot of biographies on such celebrities as Cathy Freeman, Rex and Ian Thorpe. And I found a Zenna Dare book for 3 or 4 dollars.
PPS. Sorry about writing that on a review.

Nice chapter...but now I need more ACTION and TWISTS!
Yes, I want MORE MORE MORE MORE!
:-)

fROM YOUR FRIEND,
JAY

You're very welcome everyone! I'm just glad I could get the Magic Bringer to update faster...because it means more for me to read!

So anyway, it's really good, obviously. I'm so excited! I can't wait to find out who killed Hannah. (Was it you?)
Please update NOW!

Jay

PS. Hurry up and finish the James Patterson book!

It's good so far. I would like more.

Very original idea, great story so far. I'm looking forward to an update.

great update!

Ha! I'm on FF! Anyway, great story! I already know what happens but hurry up so I can read it anyway :-)

this is so cool! way to go, rolling with the cool people who hang out online.

Cool idea - haha, death of a fanfic author...kinda hits close to home, don't it?! Anyways, I like this. Thanks for posting it, I'm looking forward to more.