Reviews for Sweet, sweet seduction

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thelastunicorn 2007-06-30 ch 10,	abuseI'm totally sure Ran wanted some, only not noodles but some sweet delicious half-naked Ken. Damn that line could have been interpreted so nicely. Ran saying yes and then jumping on Ken with Ken pushing him off and asking what the hell he was doing, making Ran then tell him that Ken had asked him if he wanted some and he taking Kenken up on the offer and Ken then pointing at the noodles and saying that he was talking about the noodles. We all know by now that sexually everything is dandy between Ran and Ken but wasn't Ken upset about Ran still being a bastard to him when they weren't busy screwing around? Isn't this where we should be working to? Getting Ran to act lovy dovy around Kenken? I think Yohji and Schuldig need to get their head out of the Kama Sutra (although the book may possible still learn some tricks from those two, LOL) and start with the more romantically and daily side of a relationship. I say we cut Ran off till he does his best to act at least civil towards Kenken! Yet this may need some serious work on Ken's brain too seeing as the boy is eager enough to please Ran sexually seeing as it is also very pleasing to him. I mean come on, he did jump rather quickly on the train of where Ran's thoughts were going. Just a small hint towards the things Schuldig and Yohji had been whispering to him all week and the boy was already putty in Ran's hands. I do doubt however that they used a condom. I have a sneaky suspision that the lock is still locked, LOL. And yes, once again Ran's legendary control lasted, well, it didn't last at all, LOL. Makes you start to wonder if he actually ever had one. So what now? Have the others walk in on our two screwing bunnies? The poor mental scarring of the two younger members? Can't wait to see where we'll be heading now. Kisses and hugs Gillie
thelastunicorn 2007-06-21 ch 9,	abusePoor, poor Kenken (shakes her head). The boy really has it tough now doesn't he? I think Crawford and Ran better take a lesson out of this namely that next time they want to get info out of someone, they just have to stick the incredible duo Schuldig/Yohji on the poor innocent non-suspecting guy and then the gur will sing without a problem. I mean, come on ... they've just managed to reduce a brave fearless assassin to a whimpering crying man so what better torture device could they possibly come up with? But I still wonder why Schwarz showed up out of the blue. I hope Yohji didn't call them so he could enlist Schuldig's help in his plan "let's get Ran and Ken screwing around like bunnies". Ha lover spats between Ken and Ran, I do remember some good ones, LOL. But I think Ken is doing a very good job in seducing the icecycle cause I'm sure that Ran can't stay indifferent to a wheeping Kenken. Yet, what do Yohji and Schuldig still have in store for the redhead and the brunet and more importantly ... what are those damn fantasies they were talking about!? Kisses and hugs Gillie
thelastunicorn 2007-06-09 ch 8,	abuseHey, great to have you back. Hope everything is okay and that you had a great time. Poor Kenken and Ran. Yohji seems just to be loving to interfere with their relationship and the others just love to know all about it. Those two really don't have any privacy or quiet time for themselves so they can work through things on their own. I hope the guys do realise that when ever people interfere too much in a relationship that relationship has so more chances of failing to work. Although in Yohji's defense we have to say he only does it cause he likes Kenken that much and wants to help the poor brunet out. Had to laugh though at Yohji who kept ranting on without taking time to breath resulting in a blue face. But I'm sure Omi didn't mind giving Yohji mouth to mouth afterwards, LOL. And I predict more headaches for Ran to come. Cause I may not know yet why Schwarz is there but I'm a 100% certain that at least Schuldig won't miss this golden oppurtunity to also have his say about the realtionship between Ken and Ran and will also start interfering like Yohji does. Heck maybe Schuldig and Yohji can team up, LOL. I am curiousus as to why Schwarz is there and well ... I have to say that I'm pretty certain we'll get an even more caoutic household, LOL. Kisses and hugs Gillie
Kanon Hara 2006-11-18 ch 7,	abusewhat about the yohji and omi? lol cute fic though... so are aya and ken together? or are they just friends with benefits? i'm looking forward to the next chapter =]
thelastunicorn 2006-10-14 ch 7,	abuseHm no loving for Aya tonight it seems. But poor Chloe who gets hit without knowing what he has done this time to deserve Ken's anger or better said what someone else has done to get Ken angry to this point. Yes, Aya let's pray for a mission so that Ken can get rid of a bit of his pent up frustration otherwise you are going to be in for one hell of a brawl tonight which most probably will end with no loving for you. As for Aya thinking they have already settled everything, duh! The only thing they have done when they were alone and could have had the chance to talk about their relationship, was ** each other senseless. Somehow I don't think there was much talking during these moments, except maybe for some verbal screams, pleas and coaxing the other to do something sexual tinted, LOL. Auch, I think that Aya can better prepare himself for many headaches and arguments if he is planning on pursuing a relationship with sweet Kenken. We all know how hot temmpered the brunet is and how easily he flies of the handle. Yep Aya, just keep the Vidocane close at hand, LOL. Then again I heard that sex does wonders for headaches, LOL. Yet I do wonder if Kenken will be able to keep his resolve about 'no sex for Aya tonight' if he gets faced with an Aya who most probably will be predatory and out for some sweet and delicious Kenken. And Ken just had to blatter it out now didn't he? That boy really has a too big of a mouth at times, LOL. Nice thinking of Omi to use Free as a shield should it come down to it. Had to laugh at that little line where you made Omi scoot closer to Free just in case. But as they say in French "Quand on a mangé du poison, on peut tres bien finir jusqu'a l'assiette" something as "If you spilled the beans then you might as well confess everything." And Ken is such a nice boy to exactly do this. I'm sure Yohji was having a field day, LOL. And Yohji just had to be his smug self about it, now didn't he? "You can’t cut someone off from something they don’t have." "Fine?" "Alright, fine it was ‘great’. How many times?" Yes, you really have to love Yohji, LOL. But twelve times? Twelve? Let's call the Guiness Book of Records! Jesus, I'm amazed that Ken is still able to walk around. Omi fell off his chair. "What? I was working at that table this morning Ken!" Realising the horror of his morning experience to it's full extend, he claimed "Let's burn the table." with such a look that the other backpeddaled out of fear. Hm I wonder if Omi will dare to still go near the table, LOL. Well at least one person in the whole room doesn't seem fased out by Ken and Aya's activities on the working table. And then there is also the ever silently Free who probably has a whole lot of thoughts running through his head about what he all witnessed and heard in Ken's room. Yeah, Fee is just such a cuty! He's just so adorable with his silent and stoic behaviour. But damn no loving for us either till February. (pouts) Hope everything goes well for you at basic training and see you back in February. I'm keeping you to your promise that you'll continue this when you are back! Kisses and hugs Gillie
Moon without a Sun 2006-07-27 ch 5, anon.	abuseYay! Just yay.
thelastunicorn 2006-07-27 ch 5,	abuseWell what can I say, what can I say? Your title for the chapter was definitly very well chosen, LOL. Man you just almost killed me with the beginning of the chapter where you had all these little sentences which always ended in 'screw this or that cause Ken is there beside Aya and Aya found having sex with Ken a far more better option then anything else. And Aya is so right about it. I'm glad that he has finally seen the light. Ah my Aya is all grown up now. (sniffs a few times) I'm not surprised that Ken does indeed feel like he won't be able to walk for a week. Man they must have set the World Record for having several times in a row sex, LOL. (damn where are the camera's in Ken's room when you need them.) Hope the poor Siberian kitty won't get any missions in the upcoming days or that could be awkward seeing his poor walking state. Hm Yohji is probably going to have a field day when he sees Ken walking stifly around and puts two and two together (namely Aya's disappearence in Ken's room for several long, very long, hours and Ken's state afterwards). But yeah, Ken was the one who igniciated it! You go Ken! Just pounce that red head and have your wicked way with him. Oh wait that already happened. Loved this line by the way "Ken felt like crying, he wasn't supposed to go out like this, killed by his crush! How pathetic is that! But he probably got points for the fact that Aya was an elite assassin and slightly psychopathic on a good day." It just gave me a good laugh and it would really be something that Ken would be thinking given the situation he is in at that moment. And yes let us agree with Ken. Thank god for swordmanship. Awesome and fun chapter and I'm sure you have much more for us waiting. Can't wait! Kisses and hugs Gillie
RosefaerietaleRed 2006-07-22 ch 4,	abuseHeh, I liked the old woman, very funny!
Moon without a Sun 2006-07-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseYay! You updated. Oh dear... Silly Aya, no one can resist Ken! It's the first rule of fanfiction! Resistance is futile! Like denial.
thelastunicorn 2006-07-21 ch 4,	abuseI must say this is even better. Not alone Aya is standing outside of Ken's room but the whole gang is. It's a shame though that the ones who aren't from Weiss don't seem to have a clue about what is going on. I'm guessing Ken yelled in Japanese that he didn't need any help in seducing Aya. Although Yuki understands Japanese, no? Whoah for once the one to fear seems to be Kenken and not Aya. That's a first time. Normally it is Aya who Yohji has to watch out for but now there is a new champion in the house. You go Kenken! And damn why did Aya make the wrong decision? Everyone knows that he should have gone for the 'he should go talk to Ken and possibly him'. That was such a better option then the one he has eventually chosen. Well I guess that Kenken will then have to do his utmost best to make Aya change his mind and decide that he can better go with the 'he should go talk to Ken and possibly him' option. Hm Ken is still in bed so either Ken needs to get Aya in his bed or otherwise he could be naked (sleeps naked for instance and his covers have slid of the bed) when Aya barges in or is once again naked cause he is just changing when Aya comes in. Yep, those actions from Ken would definitely cause a rise of Aya's blood pressure. And then I would like to see how his legendary control holds up, LOL. Kisses and hugs Gillie
lotr_Blade@yahoo.com 2006-07-07 ch 3, anon.	abuseToo short Too short~! So kawaii though! ^^ ZL
thelastunicorn 2006-06-29 ch 3,	abuseAh, poor Kenken. You really make him suffer now don't you? Ah what the heck, Ken is just so adorable when he gets tortured like this. Besides Ran and Ken just belong together so I am with Yohji and his devilish plans all the way! "No one, and he meant no one, out did him in the stubbornness department." best line of this third chapter and so true. If someone can be stubborn then it is our dear Kenken, LOL. But I don't think that he was out stubborning Omi and Yohji. I think it was a certain red head and I am pretty curious to why he wanted to talk to Ken although I guess with Ken's confession this red head will have other things to think about now and we'll maybe never know what he was doing banging on Ken's door. Anyways, get those two together but first torture them with many more uther ridiculous plans! Give us a great laugh. Kisses and hugs Gillie
Kanno 21 2006-06-26 ch 3,	abuse' No one, and he meant no one, out did him in the stubbornness department. Ever. ' ... that's Ken alright! ^_^ And that was probably Aya at the door, right? I can't wait to see what happens next!
Kanno 21 2006-06-10 ch 2,	abuseGod, I love this! Your story really cracked me up! I particulary like Youji's way to see things and come to conclusions, and I absolutely love the whole plan with steps, and Ken shouting 'nani' louder and louder for each one. I hope you're going to update soon, I can't wait for more! ^_^
ZL 2006-06-08 ch 2,	abuseNe this is so cute...update soon=D ZL

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