  VermilionValentine 2007-09-29 . chapter 17NO *temper tamtrum* YOU CANT LEAVE IT THERE! I WONT LET YO! |
| lukomouse 2007-09-05 . chapter 17 aw if victoria had a computer i'd make her read this! she's such a freak though. seriously. no computer? how does she live! |
| Mako-Magic 2007-08-11 . chapter 5 i love ed's views of equivalent exchange! i even find myself saying it in my head from time to time! but hes right here, roy has no right to start demanding answers from ed!
mako |
| hink 2007-05-02 . chapter 17 finally! i was waiting for that drunken convo (not the drunk part) for about 10 chapters now. :)nice one. |
| hink 2007-05-01 . chapter 5 er...50 meters is like 150 feet...i very much doubt you could hear someone from that far off unless they're screaming... |
| MewMewVanilla 2007-03-03 . chapter 17 >:O is that is?! it that it!?
XD in the beginning where edo was drunk im like "XD rofl"
...paedophile...? O_o?? |
| oStilloDreamingo 2007-03-01 . chapter 17 LOL! Its a good ending as any other I think. At least you knew that you wanted to end this fic on a high note, as opposed to writing filler chapters until inspiration strikes. This has been an excellent fic. One of my faves on fma. So do not despair! (Stupid pun I know.) |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-28 . chapter 17 I will not let you end this story just yet.It's way too good to just end like this and I will think up of ideas for this story and send it to you if i have to.The story rocks and you rock for writing it.Please Please Please Please don't end it yet.*Do the puppy eyes and starts sniffling*I enjoyed reading it and you just can't end it. |
| Shadewolf7 2007-02-28 . chapter 17 Kind of a sudden cut-off, but not a bad story. |
| Danielle Anderson 2007-02-27 . chapter 17 Drunk Ed and Roy were amusing. I'm glad Ed and Winry patched things up.
And yeah, the ending is kinda sad, bittersweet *sigh*. Thanks for posting, I'm glad the story is completed, it does end on an optimistic note, IMO :). |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-20 . chapter 16 Hahahahahaha winry got slapped by pinako and I've been waiting for someone to do that. |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-20 . chapter 15 AW Roy and Ed kissed.*throws confetti everywhere and squeals*. What you said about winry is kinda right and I like winry just not like a whole lot.I know she can be bossy a lot of times but she is trying to keep an eye out ed and al |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-20 . chapter 14 The chapter was great as always |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-20 . chapter 13 Aw and I wish Trisha was in the story to talk to Ed |
| Roy Mustang 08 2007-02-20 . chapter 12 The chapter was great and I hope nobody figured out that he had tried to transmute hughs |
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