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Reviews For: What If Deset Dancer 1

Flutechick
2007-06-22
ch 2, anon.
abuseLet me tell you something.It sent lightning bolts down my arms...that means your good(Im hard to impress)
Flutechick
2007-06-22
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it but didn't Aunt Sue haer it?
kasey33
2006-09-01
ch 2,
abuseoh my god u r so good at writing i luv this story!
Gypsy Gold
2006-08-09
ch 2,
abuseThat was great!
And I had another idea for a What if story.
Maybe u could do 1 like what if Sam's mom never died, idk??
just an idea. :):)
Harmony'sSake
2006-07-18
ch 2,
abuseThat was AWESOME! Please write more chapters or a sequel!! Please! You're a awesome author!
Diamonds.Rio.Grande
2006-07-04
ch 2,
abuseyou did it.

you did what i told you not to do.

you made them all love puppy like, and totally screwed them up.

i dont mean to insult you, please dont be offended by this, but i just personally hate when that happens.

*wacks head on keyboard*

im outa hear!!
Diamonds.Rio.Grande
2006-07-04
ch 1,
abusei think that Terri Farely should have made Jake and Sam kiss after that talk. ive always wondered what really should have happened after that talk.

it was odd. please dont make Jake act all weird after this!!

i hate when at the begining of fanfics the characters act the way they are supossed to, but then the characters act all stupid becasue they admit they are in love.

-Kairi
EFloveshorses345
2006-06-21
ch 2, anon.
abuseUPDATE UPDATE UPDATE please it is really good i really like it please update
EFloveshorses345
2006-06-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseway to bring it home it was brilliant pefect keep writing
Shingalala
2006-06-19
ch 2,
abuseAw, so beautiful I love this fic and I for one dont mind a bit of mush. Keep writing. :-D
Carryin'daBannerGoil
2006-06-08
ch 1,
abuseLoved it...Jake's slip of the tongue telling Sam he loves her...classic! Excellent job, very funny.
Dreamstar's Courage
2006-06-05
ch 1,
abuseHope this isn't oneshot.
Brit1292
2006-05-27
ch 1,
abusethis is a good story write more chapters soon.
coffeelover12
2006-05-20
ch 1,
abuseI love your story I think you did i great job and i hope this isn't a one shot it's to good
HorseLover20693
2006-05-20
ch 1,
abuseLoved it! Update asap!
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