Wow. This is really fantastic. Great style and development. Clever wording here and there and not so elaborate that it's hard to follow. The only thing you could improve on is some detail to the character's location. Some description of daylight through a window in the kitchen or something of how the room looks, but really, this was very enjoyable. Kudos.

I love it. You have managed to capture Dresden's voice perfectly whilst maintaining you own writing style. Cu-dose to you!

My only worry is that you don't know where you are going with this. I hope to be proven wrong when you update.

This is actually one of the better stories I've read about Harry Dresden. It’s short, but well written with a good dose of sarcasm. I hope to see this continued.

Fantastic! It's almost like reading Jim's work! You even have the traditional hilarious opening line in there! It's perfect. Keep it up, I'm dying to read more!

I liked this story, look foward to reading the next chapter.

Nice job, seamless transition into a new book.

WOW! Great writing. Will this develop into your version of Book 9? If you can, update as soon as possible please.

Loved it. This is really good. Your style is just like Jims, Dresden's character and the world your writing match up perfectly to Jim's. When can I expect some more.

One thing though, do you have a plot? It just seems like the alternate Dresden scene was a little pointless, also in harrys apartment what actually happened? He woke up, had a shower, and then told mouse they were going for a run. Is that it?

this is great i cannot tell you (or rathe r i can but i would rnd up as a thesaurus to happy) how glad i am to see someone writing Dresden fanfiction, and so well to, you d oa great job sumerizing what has happened up to this point and you have Dresdens chapacture perfect, i like your writing styal too especialy the iner dialog. good job keep it up.

Thanks for wrriting,

Jay