Reviews for Bruce Wayne and the Sorcerer's Stone

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Gyre 2008-09-22 ch 8,	abuseThis is one of the most interesting HP crossovers I've read. Well in keeping with Bruce's character. Thought crossed my mind of what Trelawney will say on seeing Bruce in year two. Her vision ought to be good.
Delta Operator 2008-09-02 ch 8,	abuseWhen I saw the title and 'Bruce Wayne' what I thought I saw was "John Wayne" and the Sorcerers Stone. I was like "Oh snap!" but after I started reading it I realized, with much dissapointment, that it wasn't John Wayne but Bruce Wayne, in this case Lil' Batman. Didn't stop me from reading it though and it was a very kick ass story...even if John Wayne wasn't actually in it. Now onto the second story.
Nomadic1 2008-08-27 ch 2,	abuseActually I expected Slytherin, it fits the Bat quite well. Interesting story.
derawr 2008-07-29 ch 8,	abuseCute. :) I loved it.
joel 2008-06-05 ch 2, anon.	abuseGreat story so far by the way. Thought i'd just say, i'd actualyl expected him to end up in Slytherin. Its not that he wouldn't have trouble fitting elsewhere. He has a thirst for knowledge, but its not just knowledge for knowledges sake, like ravenclar. He is certainly very loyal, and he does have a saving people think and can be quite rash... but as he is now, he is ambition personified. He has gone to hogwarts with the intention of basically gaining power. He intends to conquer hogwarts. He intends to fix gotham. Its an idealistic thing, but he wants all the power he can get.. and hes secretive and paranoid... or cunning as i would think of it. he fits elsewhere, but slytherin is the house for him.
Slvrstar 2008-02-23 ch 7,	abuseVery good. I did notice that you're missing a few commas and spaces, and it's Mrs. Norris, not Ms Norris. Also, you may want to work on making it feel as though a year has passed since the beginning of the story-it feels far to short. I really like the premise of this one and it's very good for having been written in one night. Please add another chapter onto Chamber of secrets a.s.a.p.!
Daisuke 2007-09-20 ch 8,	abuseGreat story. By the way, when Bruce gets out of Hogwarts he can very well go of to be Batman AND use magic. He just can't do it before he's seventeen. But anyway, I don't see him trying to be Batman that young, he'd go to Japan or China to learn martial arts too... This will be one interesting Batman, if you get to write him.
allison 2007-09-18 ch 3, anon.	abuseHATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE HATE (full yet?) HATE HATE HATE HATE...
Luna 2007-08-30 ch 2, anon.	abusereally good story but toads are amphibians not reptiles
Tombadgerlock 2006-11-12 ch 3,	abuseEventually, when he finally informed McGonagall of his ability to cast ‘Wingardium Leviosa’, it was only at a time when she would not think of him as an especially bright pupil. Uh... a small mistake there, flitwick is the hcamr professor, not Mcgonagall... Also, you made Bruce way too intelligent and proactive, me think, and having ron even knowing aboutthe stuify hex is somehwat astounding, much less using it.
Tombadgerlock 2006-11-12 ch 2,	abuseSigh, i really hope he doesn't abandon magic. Oh, and the slytherin decision was what i dreaded- way too many people use slytherin as a mean for a darker hero. Sigh.
Tombadgerlock 2006-11-12 ch 1,	abuseVery good beginning, it makes me wonderifyou stopped it in the second year or not. Hopefully not.
Dreambender 2006-08-29 ch 8,	abuseWow! Well, that was an interesting POV of how things went down in the Harry Potter book. That was an amazing fic, though there was a lack of detail about the surroundings and too much talk about what Bruce is thinking about. Looking into what Bruce is thinking about is good, but too much makes it kinda boring. The ending is good, though in my opinion it would have been better if Bruce quit or if he was expelled for threatening to melt off Malfoy's face. In the end, this is a great fic which could just use a few tweeks. With that, there is only one last thing to say: More power and keep bending dreams.
Ladyofthebookworms 2006-08-01 ch 8,	abuseYeaah, Stupid Ministry. Except, since Bruce lives in America, it would be more like the... President of Magis or something like that. On to the Chamber!
Ladyofthebookworms 2006-08-01 ch 6,	abuseGr... Gotta get off just as it's getting interesting! Bruce in Slytherin... Makes sense to me.

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