tahnee 2008-11-17 . chapter 9 i likr this chapter a lot update right away please |
lilyfairygirl 2008-11-15 . chapter 9hey keep it up on this story its very good too and hoping soon they dont treat her bad and hoping soon that seiya and usagi be together soon and keep it up on your stories too okay
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tahnee 2008-11-14 . chapter 9 great chapter update soon |
Princesa de la Luna 2008-11-12 . chapter 9awesome. thanks for updating i apperciate it. i can't wait for more. please update when you can. thanks again. |
F.E.W.Scouts Writer 2008-11-12 . chapter 9WOAH! IS SEYIA AND USAgi I MEAN MEGUMI GONNA GET MARRIED AND HAVE 42 kids?LOL jk...I can't believe it!Are they getting married? |
KaliAnn 2008-11-11 . chapter 9I really liked it. The other sailors seems a little to harsh, but in the end they all worked together. I can't believe how much Seyia loves her. It just goes to show what the power of love and teamwork can do. |
Yannina 2008-11-11 . chapter 9 Seiya loves her, maybe he doesn't realize yet, but he proposed her, so that is almost like an " I want you " sign. I will be really nice if they get married, but leavethe town ... I don't believe that Taiki and Yaten will be ok with that, mainly because Seiya is the leader of Three Lights. I really enjoyed this chapter. Megumi is so cute and her relationship with Seiya is geting more and more interesting. |
James Birdsong 2008-11-11 . chapter 9 Keep up the good work. Apology accepted. You did well *applaud* |
Yannina 2008-10-20 . chapter 8 Sorry I'm from Argentina, that is in South America, so my English is not quite good. I really want to know if you are going to update "Becose of you". I think that the story is really amazing. Sorry if I didn't review it, but it is incredibly hard for me to say what I want to say (becouse I speak Spanish). Also your other fanfic "elemental love" is quite good, but is like same sort of mix between avatar and captain America. The dialogues are really funny. Kisses from here and " porfis no me dejes colgada con el cuento q me voy a poner del tomate". |
TinGirl314 2008-10-01 . chapter 8Please update soon! |
MoonPrincess623 2008-09-28 . chapter 8WOw, sorry it took me so long to read the rest, i...forgot to story alert this! But i love it and can't wait till you publish more! |
Hollywood Recycle Bin 2008-09-04 . chapter 8Cool story. I love the idea that you used with Sailor Moon still active despite the memory lost and i love Megumi. I like how the Starlights are shown to be both friendly with Megumi but then switching the moment there's suspicion, i do think that's like them. I really love how you write Yaten, so cute! I'm a lot more bothered by how you write Haruka though, I think you make her too violent in the earlier chapters and kinda flat. I also really wish that you won't have Seiya be a guy all the time when there's Seiya/Megumi action going on. |
SailorVengeance19 2008-08-19 . chapter 8Hey Great Chapter. I was wondring if it had to be Seiya/Usagi pairing? sure Seiya is cool and all but so is Taiki and Yaten. |
katie 2008-08-19 . chapter 8 GAH!! |
dreamcaster 2008-08-19 . chapter 8 Woh... nice story... hmm.. I wonder.. what Haruka will do... Good story.. it been awhile since your last update.. please update often if can,.. thanks |