uh, i like the part, where luffy was confused :D
I just imagined the greatest expression on his face when she was leaning in. And he pulls it off so well with those huge eyes of his x3 heehee.

Questions: Who was throwing the party? Why did they have to dress up? and was luffy wearing shoes, sandels or barefoot?

Flows very well, and is not rushed ^_^. Good job!

I am usually completely against the use of songs in the middle of fics, but it worked wonderfully here.

Especially when i started reading the song, i recognised it, and put it on while reading the fic. It suited perfectly :]

Really lovely!

This is a great story so far! LOL at the mens quarters but it has already been said that neither Zoro or Naim can actually get drunk due to their high tolerence to alcohol. God job anyway! Put the next chapter up!

so cute! another chaper please

wow. I really adore this story. Please write more! Instant fav! Awesome story! Hope to see more of Nami and Luffy! Awaiting Update with a smile! YOU'RE AWESOME!

Wicked Ausem please write more ASAP

i love the part they danced with the song... nice story...

love it so write more!

Come on, come on! I want to know more about Luffy and Nami's relation! ^_^Rock with it!

YAY! A Luffy/Nami story! Sorry I haven't reviewed earlier...I can't help you out with your story that much, though I think that someone from Arlong's crew should be the villain. Nice chapter, I'll try to read and review the next one soon...

Bye for now (n_n).

i wouldn't even know where to start with advice. i've never actually started a chapter fic without knowing exactly where it was gonna go...
And i don't know what kind of action you enjoy writing. ususally i go with a kidnapping or the guy getting run through or someone almost dying... but i write heavy drama. Pure romance like in this story is kinda hard to maintain for me.

But i think it's sweet! i just can't see it going for too long on dazzling beauty and tiny touches without something more happening quickly. You could let her get nervous around him, but that wouldn't be what this chapter felt like at all until the end. so keeping this same chapter feel, i can't think of too much action that will keep it going aside from the typical exciting things...

YAY! Ypu updated! Wow! this was an awsome chapter I loved it so much I love your storys! Your definatly one of my favorite authors!

i like this story so far please update more !
=D i`l be waiting for next chapter !

luffy's so stupid. i love the story its so adorable. keep it up.