:D

You had good ideas, just too many for such a short one shot...it should have been developed more if not into chapters then at least a more decent length oneshot.

Other than that, good work.

WickedTorchwoodFan

what happened BEFORE he liked voldie? when he was a captive?

This story is horrible.

Love it

Hee hee! You have no idea how excited I was when you changed Mione's name. Seeing as she's one of my faaaavoritest characters and that MY name is Alicia... Well, I burst out into giddy laughter. So my mom is looking at me funny now...

Oh well.

Awesomely cool story. Good job. :D

this stories ending was hilarious! i loved it! please make more like this?

waw, nice story, thanks for writing it

wow. just wow. i dont have anything else to say. you left me speechless

Summary and the Start was interesting but the end was just ridiculous. was this supposed to be a humorous Story? Dumbledore being Happy about Harry being with Voldemort...

Wow, I really have nothing to say.

Started out really good, but then turned really stupid. highly disappointed

Is this fic supposed to be a silly humorous fic?

cuz i took it as serious romance story and as i went on reading, it was kinda disturbing to find everyone changing into other people...

3 P's Perfect, Priceless and peeing my pants laughing.Loved it please do a sequel cos it ended a bit to suddenly i think.

An execellent story! However i think you should add an epilogue that takes place after the baby is born.

AnimeAngel