Accurate characterization of Kyoya.

Very good! Kyoya is always in control *smiles knowingly* Love it XD

well written. very kyoya.

Oh, I loved that. It was beautiful and Kyoya was perfectly in character; I loved the insertion of Ryoji, because the fact that he does have some strange connection with Kyoya is rarely explored. Haruhi was appropriately dense and immensely charming, and the whole thing just had this nice air of tension that kept me thinking, does he like her or doesn't he? Is he only using her or isn't he?

One little thing - it may be 'blows out a sharp breath' rather than a 'sharp breathe' - but that's just a minor detail, anyways. Overall, it was lovely, lovely. Excellent job. =)

Oh, very, very nice.

really nicely done =) everyone is wonderfully in-character, and i love it how kyoya's in denial xD very realistic, too.

oh, and i just noticed that my review for "candykiss" seems to have been cut off =.=" i shall type it up again here, since i can't review twice over there =( what i wanted to say, was:

despite huni-haru being a rather crack pairing, the way you've written it is probably the only way it could ever happen. you've made the impossible possible! i love how you've acknowledged huni's not-a-child-but-not-quite-grown-up personality, and haruhi's (almost) unfazed attitude and the way she seems to be almost in a daze but still functioning properly at the end. very well written, and all tied up nicely too.

looking forward to more ouran fics from you =)

Ooh. Nice. Kind of ominous, but nice.

Interesting ^^ I'd like to see more to this story--maybe I'm missing the whole point, but it seems like it ends kind of abruptly, and I liked where it was going when it ended!

*smirk* That was interesting insight... with just a smidge of denial on Kyoya's side concerning the idea of KyoHaru.

Awesome!

That was soo interesting.

Heh, that was pretty good actually! Bravo ! I really like the way you reveal... well, let us guess, how Kyoya's feeling

Marvellous insights into Kyoya's character. I found them quite in character and I like the use of the simple present--makes the story all the stronger. Will be looking for other KH fics from you. Thanks ^^

Rather nicely done.

You're right. Kyouya us hard to pin down...although I think you've quite got him there.

Wonderful! I think you portrayed their relationship very accurately. Keep up the good work!

o! great fic!