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| Emberseve 2007-07-14 ch 2,  | abuseThis is actually pretty interesting...PLEASE UPDATE SOON! - Emberseve |
| V 2006-05-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseTwo sentences seem pretty brief for a story (even a drabble). I think you have an interesting idea - it just needs some work. Description and punctuation are critical. |
| zefian 2006-05-20 ch 1, | abusethis was a great story so far but it goes to fast write another story but make it longer |