very good keep up the excellent work and please update this fanfic soon many thanks ttyl

well done.
i enjoyed touya's pain... more like i felt it
BJ

love this story
poor yuuhi
BJ

w0w! thank you for writing an AyaxYuuhi fic.. ayaxyuuhi is so much better than tooyaxaya.. anyway great story ) update s00n! ) )

I just love yuhixaya

YES A Yuuhi/Ayay fic! You rock! I like how this is coming out so far. . .please write more chapters soon! _

*-RainbowSerenity-*

Excellent, aboslutely excellent, you captured Yuuhi's personality very well I was happy with that. Is this the last chapter? I hope it's not I'd love to see a couple more chapters, very well written. I liked the AnC sequels, they were kinda sweet n' all but I think I liked it more because of Yuuhi x Chidori..I'm for Yuuhi x Aya..I'm also Yuuhi x Ceres favorable (Yuuhi's a pimp lol). Anyway, great great story!

hi...i like your fic...quite dramatic and also realistic..keep up the good work...i can't wait to read the next chapter or so...gtg...hope to read more of your fic soon...bye..

Mm.. First Ayashi no Ceres fanfic I've brought myself to read yet. I haven't been able to do it because I'm sure I'd see something I didn't like and it would anger me. But in any case.. Err.. I'm a little confused at this point. _* I love Yuuhi to death, but seeing her say that she FELT for Tooya, but she LOVED Yuuhi kinda struck a chord with me. I don't know if I'm going to continue reading this once I get to the other computer. (One just opened up at my house. I'm sick of this compie.) I hope I do.. I'm interested. Your writing style is pretty good, although you make the chapters too short. (In my opinion anyhow. _*) Believe me, I do too. But in any case.. keep it up. It's good to see someone decent on the site that's supposed to support good writers.

THIS IS SO GOOD! I mean, you are way too modest! Youre authors notes all say that you are a bad writer, but you're a fantastic writer! I mean, i could be a little biased because I am all for AyaYuuhi romances, but its still one of the best ive read. KEEP WRITING!

Dramatic chapter! Please continue!

I defently liked this story. I was really good!.

AMAZING simply a great fan fiction that I've seen since the Fushigi Yuugi fanfic. FInish it finish it . Anyway I agree it should be Yuuhi Aya pair instead of Tooya u know why. Contact me if u need any help coz the story is just too COOL

Ah, please continue! I like the Yuuhi/Aya pairing. Yuuhi's so much cooler than Tooya. More NORMAL too.

Ahahahaha, I'll try to finish this fic, but schoolwork is seriously lagging me from doing almost ANYTHING lately... gomen ne ;;