there's something eerie about it. i like it.

awesomely chilling! great job!

This fic has a real old school fairy tale flavor too it. Very cool.

Creepy. I loved it!

Hmm, is being sucky on me so I'm not sure if my review got submitted or not. But like I last said - I love the creepy cruel Naraku you've written. He's not the main focus of the original series like in this fic, but I think you've nailed down his character perfectly.

Terrific job!

Dude, that was wicked awesome! It was very interesting and well written. 9.7 out of 10, way to go! ^_^

Wow.
What a great, yet dark, fic. Not that I'm complaining. It's been awhile, if ever, since I've read a good Inu story telling the tale of main characters tragic deaths.
I just love it.
Great job. You're portayal of the characters and their deaths were realistic to the storyline and the ending was amazing. I think the ending is why the story is so..so truthful to the storyline. If the gang were to die, the ending would surely throw their deaths in Naraku's face as in showing him he can't win, whether they die or not. Like their deaths, even by his own hand, would be his downfall.
Before I read too much into hidden meanings in the story (I tend to often) I'll just close and say wow again.
Wow.
til next time...♪♫♪

Aw that was... odly creepy and sad and kind of cute and inspiring at the same time wired huh? Anyways I loved it...

O.O Wow, powerful. I am speechless. Another wonderful fiction, you always do such great work. Hope to read more of your writing ^^

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Gah! So sad, so good, so word-depriving! I hope you write more like this. Can you recommend any other authors who've responded to that LJ topic?

This was intense and very, very good. I give it an A+.