I really liked this! Please continue!! Well if you want to that it but just saying that this was interesting to read and maybe more wont be a bad thing...:)

plz write more

Wow, a really good story. I hope you continue to write. Is there a sequel?

- love your Itachi
- this is so well-written! It's so nice to read!!

I don't really have any comments to say except that I really like this. Keep up the good work!

I really laughed with the wife-husband-thing ! and the end is so...philosophic...
a sequel ?

This is now one of my favorite ItaSaku ficcies besides the ever-famous Leafygirl's and other great writers' fics.
The story flowed very-VERY [emphasis right there, hah.) nicely.
And I certainly like how you play with your words/phrases [x
The plot was of-course original, not to mention creative and you made it work (superbly). [God, let's see how many more adjectives I can fit in :P]
Usually when I read an extremely long chapter [or in this case 'one-shot'], I sometimes just skim really quickly, stopping here-and there where something seems interesting. But for the first time, I can say that the WHOLE entire story captured my attention. My eyes were literally drinking in each sentence, word-for-word.
Pity that this had to be a one-shot, since it definitely could've been more than that, even if it was just gonna be a short story, it still counts for something. Though I understand there's a thing called 'life' out there [x But maybe that's just because of my ever insatiable need of more potentially-decent [this being more than decent] ItaSaku ficcies. But eh, one-shot works too, since the ending leaves the reader with ambiguous possibilities.

Wow. This was completely awesome. I commend you on an awesome fic! :D You mentioned perhaps continuing this. I believe it would be awesome if you would. :) Fantastic fic again!! I thoroughly loved and enjoyed it. ^_^

Hmm you're right this story can stand well enough on its own. But there's potential for loads more. Whatever you decide I suppose. This is certainly different from the other Ita/Saku stories I've read. Their encounter here is more much intriguing. Their dynamics shine.

I really like this story! I really hope that you decide to continue. Although the ending might make it kinda hard. But the rest of the story based on this first chapter would make a great story! thank you!

I absolutely loved the first part of this. Adored it. I could just see that happening, Sakura doing the whole innocent 'Oh, my mean husband will protect me and my unborn child!' crap. Oh, how funny it was that Itachi went along with it so well.

However, I don't quite like the very last part of this. When Sakura tries to sleep on the floor--undoubtedly, she'd be able to fall asleep because she's probably slept in worse spots. And then the whole, seemingly random contemplation on love? I don't know where that came from.

You do have a talent for words and for Itachi. This story was perfect - reliable, not rushed, and yet with a spark. Everything beautifuly IC, and you even didn't have to explain his mighty plan he wants Sakura for. Amazing. I'm all in love for this concept, it has so much potential. I really hope some day you'll have inspiration and time to write continuation, it would be better than Christmas to read more of your so brilliantly IC ItaSaku.

You truly have mastered the cracked one-shot. Bravo.

I really, really hope you write more!

Ah, I can never turn down a Naruto fic with Sakura and a weird pairing. Especially when it's well written.