This was so awesome. A great idea. An original plot. I'l love for you to write more for it.

Love this! Excellent look at an alternate way for Logan to lose his memories... and wonderfully written!

~Scarlett

Wow. Wow. WOW! Mind blowing. Heart wrenching. These things can barely describe what you've written here.

I can only hope to be half as good a writer as you are, and yes, I have checked out your other stories. I hope this one will have given me enough inspiration to complete my stories. Heh.

Really good idea, the memory wiping mutation. I like the way you separated each segment, although I admit, the shift to the future at the mansion was a bit fast.

However, using this as a oneshot instead of playing it out in several different chapters has been a profoundly delightful idea, the central point of what makes this fic so mind blowing.

Great job, and I know its a bit much, but I honestly hope that you could wrok on a sequel of this. Although I know if you do that it kind of defeats the point, but still! It's just so nice.. Yes, I'm having problems letting go. LOL.

Cheers!
--Pinka14

This is amazing. Normally im not such a one-shot lover, either cuz they bore me, or the characters are to OOC or i'm just dissapointed when its too short. But yours is really really good. Your Logan was perfect! Not everyone gets him to be that way :) I'd find it great if there was somwhat of a sequel :D

Wow, nicely done, could go even farther to show her learning to give his memories back.

I would love to read more. Sequel. But I think that this should stay one shot. It _very_ good, and I think that sequel would just ruin it. Thanks.

you had a very neat story. you mangend not to be ooc with logan. that's tough! i think you should think about a sequel

Oh, this is gorgeous. I was a little hesitant going into it (not really a fan of the first-person POV) but this blew away all of my expectations. It was heartbreaking, in a way. And your Logan was pitch perfect and your characterization hit the nail on the head. And I love the idea of two strangers meeting and irrevocably changing each other's lives. Great job. I look forward to reading more from you.

What a delightful surprise to find this while browsing o.O

I'd be very interested to see this expand into something more, though it's gorgeous simply as a one-shot as well. I generally don't like first-person perspective, but this is well-wrtiten and intriguing in concept.

Very nice!

Eek! I thought I had reviewed this, but as it turns out I haven't. Bad me. Bad!

So here I am now.

I enjoyed this as a different take on Wolverine. What I would like to know is this -- if his memories come back, or Stryker, etc., will his memories of this person return too? And if so... Well, I liked this. Also, I liked Wolverine's dialogue -- it seemed very much in character.

~ AmazinglyMe

An interesting take on the movie canon. And well written too. Thanks for sharing. :0)

Wait... you have to keep going! This chapter was amazingly intriguing and I would love to hear about more Logan! The idea was super and I definitely look forward to more.

That was absolutly amazing! I highly encourage further development on this story line, I love so much!

This is awesome! Good characterisation, you've done really well with the canon characters. This one's going on the Favourites list. :D

She has to tell him. This was really good. I loved the idea of it and you wrote it well but now I want more. You can't mean to leave it there. Great story.