You write beautifully. I can't wait for hte next chapter.

Yippe, I have just found silent hill fiction and hope that you will post more soon!

I love this story. It´s so well written and I think that you have captured the moment and atmosphere really geat. Love this paring and is very happy that I found this. It´s awesome!
Can´t wait for the next chapter and I really hope that you will finish this.

Great chapter. Your writing is very descriptive and compelling. You're one of the best author's I've read here on fanfiction - I wouldn't be surprised if some day you became a novelist, or a writer. I really admire your skills.

I can't wait to see what happens to Cybil =( Poor thing.

Well-written! Very haunting and descriptive. Read the first chapter and want to read more. Very cool.

I like your way of writing in your story keep the chapters up and i'll keep reading...


-Renker

What poetic language you use! Just be careful of sentence structure; sometimes things get tangled together when you try to add so much into a single sentence. Other than that, I truly love this story. The imagery and emotion you convey is sublime.

I've never really gotten in to stories such as this, but I absolutely love this one. It's written so well and just...incredible. I like the Cybil/Rose pairing for some reason unbeknown to me, and the movie made me so mad, lol.

Please keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to reading more of this one!!
-Rayne

Hey you said part VII was to be added shortly - that was 11-02-06!! Dude, what kind of timeline do you live in?!?!

I've only just discovered it but I love this story. It's been a long time but if you've not abandoned it completely then please continue. I want to know what happens to Cybil and rose.

Thanks for what you've written, I enjoyed it.

This story is very good. You have a unique way of writing, and there are many metaphors embedded skillfully into the writing. A problem I've noticed is that you're making a common grammar error dealing with speech. With a speaking part, it ends with a comma if the next part describes the speech (and that next part would start with a lowercase letter, unless it's a name or I, etc). An example would be:

"You helped me to forget things for a moment," she spoke, untwisting her tangled top and pulling it over her head.

This is a superb story, I really enjoy it. I love Cybil, and your portrayal of her is amazing. Things seem so hopeless, yet they've at least found some solace with each other. I hope you update soon.

excellent... purely excellent... there is a shortage of Silent Hill yuri in the world, but it's good to know that there are some talented people who add to the little there is...

this story is fantastic it's so well writen please write more soon.
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This chapter is a work of art. Wonderful, WONDERful job. I can't wait for another chapter. Thanks for msging me and telling me about it ♥. It really is a pleasure to read your story. :) Your writing talents are amazing, I hope I can measure up to you someday.

That was...freaking awesome. Great chapter, very well done. Please keep up the good work and hope to see another chapter soon. ^_^

Oh I love this story so much. It's beautifully written, and it's rare to find a story with such quality. The way you portray Rose and Cybil is just... lovely.