hmmm...interesting...I recently watched a special on TNT. It was a two part mini-series. 'The Mysts of Avalon' I found it quite interesting. Good Job, I love midievil times and the stories from them.

this is really good and very creative!! kool!

Wowies! I found this fic on someone's favourites list, wow... I love it! Problem is, they don't have a section for Arthurian fics, they need one. I've been looking ALL over the place for some, and the few I found before this weren't very good. I really liked this fic, now I gotta go see what esle you've written!

Very well written - i like the ominous cloud at the end.

I love it! Arthurian legends don't get half as much representation as they should...::sigh::. This was a great story, and I hope you continue with it!

Argh, I've been registered on this site for how short a time and already I've put the review on the wrong story. This is what I meant to say to you guys: " Thanks so much for reviewing the story. I didn't realize so many people looked at this website so often. I will work on more Arthurian fanfic in the future but right now, I'm going to catch up on a project centered on Snape, a character in Rowling's Harry Potter series. But let me know if you have any ideas of what genre or stories you'd like to see me writing. I appreciate suggestions, criticism, and love praise. Who doesn't? " You'll find this same thing written under my poem, " Lancelot's Vision ". Sorry for all the confusion.

There better be more of this! And no, your grammar is not horrible. Wonderful story, and as always flushed with hints of.... well, what else could I expect from the Great---- Ah, I'll shut up now. Mne ochen ponravilos. (Translation: I liked it very much.) :)

I enjoyed this story; you have a pretty good writing style. You should write more Arthurian fiction.