Very finely captured, and expertly expressed.

XD Gaara is so cute when he's confused. "Love tastes like... hot chocolate!" ^_^ Well, at least he doesn't think it tastes like the sweetest honey or awesomely ripe strawberries, as I've read in some pretty awful lemon fics. >.>; Yay for Gaara discovering love. This is just platonic love - wait until he feels romantic love. I think he will be severely addicted to that... =)

Aw! That was really good! I liked the way you portrayed Gaara and Temari, Nice work! God I love the Sand Siblings!

Very cute. x3

Kawaii, although reading this made me crave hot chocolate!^_^ very cute fic.!

AW! THE FLUFF! *squees and hugs sand sib plushies*

My only question is: "He had been working on this particular issue since 0600 the previous day" - is that how you guys tell time up in Canada? I have a suggestion, if I may, to use like...clock time, in the future. I mean, with the 12pm, 6am, ect. 7am. I know how to read it since I'm a navy brat and I'm use to men yelling at me to do something/get up by, or whatever by 0800 hours or whatever. But like, a lot of people in america (okay, I'll be frank - are stupid) won't know how to translate that. I'm just saying, to make it easier for everyone.

I like the simile about love and hot chocolate. It's sweet (just like hot chocolate!) Ofcourse, I love the sibling fluff - YAY! MEALS ALWAYS BRING FAMILIES TOGEATHER! lol. I don't know why, but in my stories, I've always made it so none of them can cook.

OKies, I'll stop going on and on, since my review isn't really making much of a point or constructive criticism as it is just squeeing and rambling.

xD

Hi! This is B-chan from livejournal. I have to say, you write some of the best Sand sib fics I've ever read, especially this one. You've managed to catch the whole fragile family thing perfectly. I loved it.

And the idea of Gaara being a chocolate addict is just great. It's such a non threatning, child-like drink, so it's just a bit ironic and that makes it spiffy.

I like this. It was well written and introspective, and managed to portray the sand sibs without any over dramatising. Great job, I'm alerting you now :)

Paperwork strikes again

totally awesome. i'm putting it on my favs

very cute, very good. hot chocolate would have been a good title.-TK

Sweet as hot chocolate.

Absolutely adorable. ♥

I adore how you write Gaara and Temari, and her staying up with him and helping with paperwork made me squee to no end. AND, Kankuro offering to make Gaara pancakes? *dies*

SO MUCH LOVE. XD