  esaves 2008-09-18 . chapter 12It was great reading this story...i've finally reached chapter 12. the story is getting more and more exciting as new or "old" people return to the scene :D i guess putting flashbacks of reno and tifa would be good too :D
i enjoyed. thanks |
| esaves 2008-09-16 . chapter 9 hi again...i've found time again to review this story :) it's really great reading it...i like how the character's relationship is developing...i'm really fond of CloTi stories and this is the best i've read so far...hope too read more of it :) |
| esaves 2008-09-16 . chapter 3 hi! well, i've just finished reading chapter 3 but i couldn't stop reading. don't worry, i'll continue reading the story tomorrow. it's 12 midnight already so i better get into the sleeping mode.
by the way, great story plot. I like the way things are going here in every chapter. It's different from those I've read before and its quite fun coz i am able to visualize what happens. keep up the good writing works. probably, i'll be able to start one story of my own too :)
I've already added you to my fave author's list :) |
| everyday-snowangel 2008-07-28 . chapter 12 interesting! i like it a lot! ^^ |
| celestafairy89 2008-07-01 . chapter 12 Well I like it so far lol you're doing good, can't wait for the next chap! |
| KarmaBoo 2008-05-09 . chapter 12 o.o Aww... she lied to him. =[
lawl. x] |
| KarmaBoo 2008-05-07 . chapter 8 LOL mancakes. xD
*laughs out loud* |
| flipped 2008-04-26 . chapter 12 wat the.. that was a cruel cut off. tifa will be so screwed if cloud finds out. update! update! |
| flipped 2008-04-26 . chapter 11 oh.. trouble. |
| flipped 2008-04-26 . chapter 7 this chapter's way sweet!! |
| flipped 2008-04-26 . chapter 1 coolios! i already dig the first chap.. |
| BananaPeaceMonkey 2008-03-23 . chapter 6 Zack is a lunatic! But I love it anyway! |
| Epic Popcorn 2008-02-24 . chapter 12 uh..NO!! no more chapters! "last updated: 1-19-07"...over a year since this has been updated? (i thought i was bad for leaving my story for 4 months) wow, thats sad. it would really suck if this wasnt finish. this one of the best cloti's ive read. you're alright, right? when authors dont update for awhile i often think the worst(*knocks on wood*)...so lemme know whats happening with the story, 'kay? |
| Mrs.MaxiStrife 2008-02-07 . chapter 12 Good Story...Update Soon! |
| Kristin-a-dette 2008-02-02 . chapter 12 I was on Chapter 12 and just finished and was about to click on the next chapter when I realized there wasn't one!! Imagine my despair?! Man, you gotta update soon! This story is too good to be forgotten! |
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