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mjels
2008-09-24
ch 100,
abusehey

i like your story but you said that the tings that happent after stelling home we shold forget then this i dont get


“Who’d want to send me a bomb?” Lindsay asked.

“We don’t know it was a bomb.” Flack pointed out.

“It was bomb or what’s the technical term an ‘improvised explosive device’.”

“It would have started smoking if they wanted you to blow up.” Flack suggested.


“Let’s not discuss blowing things up.” Danny said glaring at Flack.

for if charge of this post not happen it was just somthing i notis


but i love you story

see you
mjels
2008-09-04
ch 107,
abusehey

i like lindsay in this story and your humor
mjels
2008-09-03
ch 1,
abusei like it
soswimmer13
2008-08-05
ch 12,
abusecolts are AFC, giants are NFC, the only time they played each other in the last few years was the year opener monday night football, brother against brother game.
soswimmer13
2008-08-05
ch 11,
abuseyou know, technically deep dish pizza has a thin crust. it just is more like a pie than a pizza. and deep dish is a chicago thing, while stuffed thick crust is a new york thing. (basically, i don't think they could get good deep dish in New york, since most new yorkers don't even believe chicago knows what pizza is)
NY-makes-me-happy
2008-06-24
ch 190,
abuseVery good story, gave me somehting to do with my day! LOL
glad it turned out well.
TaeKwonDobabe74
2008-03-10
ch 190,
abuseAre you going to write a sequal for this ?

If you already have , could you pelase tell me in a message or something .

I love your stories !
Pedroia the Destroya
2008-02-22
ch 4,
abuseCute
CaRiNeSs
2007-12-14
ch 190,
abuseOkay, I have been reading your story for like 2 days straight and finally finished it! This was so cute! I am glad they are together and having a baby! I can't wait to read the sequel... Awesome story :)
Aleja21
2007-10-21
ch 190,
abuseThis is a great story and I've loved every minute of it, I cant wait to read the sequel.
Mrs.Lindsay Messer
2007-10-18
ch 24,
abuseI love this chapter. I wonder if you could see Connecticut (my state) from the top of the Empire State Building. Love this story!!
ReJo
2007-07-01
ch 81,
abuseI love this chapter.
Elja
2007-06-19
ch 190,
abuseGREAT STORY!! - I couldn't stop reading it :)
LiaBelle
2007-06-05
ch 136,
abuseaw! yay! i was wondering when he'd propose!
LiaBelle
2007-06-05
ch 67,
abuseha ha! loved the whole vinnie thing. genius.
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