| Reviews for Girl's School |
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Marty 5/16/13 . chapter 24 Hoping that this is not the end. |
Garrett13 4/19/13 . chapter 24Ok. I REALLY love the story! It is SO creative. This is kindoff... how should I put it? This feels like it could be cannon! The only part that seems less plausible is the Nodoka part. So anyway. You already have chapters 26-30 written up right? please try for 25? Please? Just a fan don't wanna be a pest! *Thumbs up* |
Mad Elf 4/8/13 . chapter 24It's probably far too late for this, but here goes... This is by far and away the best example of this genre of fic I've ever seen! Please publish some more! |
Compucles 1/22/13 . chapter 14This is enough for now, so I'll leave one last review here: Wow, this is getting extremely weird yet hilarious. I love your pop culture references. Miyuki and Nodoka are just as crazy as the Kuno family in their own ways, while Ranma "herself" has partially cracked over learning to be a girl, and Akane's starting to lose it as well. On top of this, you're now adding Konatsu and a street gang into the mix. It really says something when the literal witch is the most sane of your original characters. By the way Ranma, I think you're looking for the Fight Card. |
Compucles 1/22/13 . chapter 9I was wondering if anyone would remember Ranma from that gymnastics match. I have no idea where you came up with that 2 month period of time, though. I don't think it's even possible for everything between then and now to have happened in two months. In actuality, it's been over a year since that match, proven by the fact that there were two different New Year's arcs in between. |
Compucles 1/22/13 . chapter 8Heh, nice "Cardcaptors" reference. Is Nodoka simply not aware that Ranma is still attracted to girls in her girl form? That would explain why she was willing to let her bathe with Akane, and while an all-girls school provides fewer distractions for most girls, how is Ranma supposed to concentrate while surrounded by attractive girls (including the one she secretly likes) wearing sailor style uniforms? |
Compucles 1/21/13 . chapter 4While Nodoka makes some good points, she is taking things too far. There is nothing wrong with being a girl...if you are indeed a girl, but it's simply not the same for someone who's really a boy. Forcing Ranma to attend school as a girl is one thing, and having him accept his curse as part of himself is a valid goal, but it's just not right to force him to fully accept his female side as an equal half to his male side. It's not mentally healthy to just screw up someone's sexual identity like that. |
Compucles 1/21/13 . chapter 2Hmm, it's an interesting premise. I've caught a couple mistakes, though. First, Miss Hinako didn't come to Furinkan High until after Ranma met his mother. Second, the manga started early in Ranma's and Akane's freshman year of high school, so they can't be juniors after just 6 months of the curse. Events in the manga up to this point indicate that over a year has passed, so maybe you just messed up on your line about how long Ranma's had the curse. |
Clare 1/8/13 . chapter 24 Of all the places to end, and you even have a few more chapters complete already... You are a damn good torturer. Seriously, I get hooked on this and end up reading this instead of the school work that needs attention, and then you end it like this, stating that you already have multiple chapters further on finished. Seriously, I can't decide if I should hate you for doing this, or love you for making such a great read. Since it's going on 2 years since the last update, I'm pretty sure I'm somewhere between anger and depressed. REALLY WISH YOU WOULD POST THE NEXT CHAPTERS! D: |
Clare 1/7/13 . chapter 14 Haha, yaoi manga. C'mon Ranma, you'll absolutely love it! - "Hey Akane, you said it was a magical girl team. Not hot guy on guy action!" - If Ranma actually said that...Heh :P Anyways, Goku? That's a...uh...first I think. |
JioFreud 1/5/13 . chapter 24This was simply amazing. I'm not just talking about the chapter either. This whole fic is awesome! I'd love to read the next chapter when it comes. |
Wandering the Arid Sea 12/16/12 . chapter 24oh my gosh o.o when I first started this, I just wanted to waste a few minutes..but now...wth. Is there someplace where I can read the whole fic? Or did you abandon it? D: |
Meck Viking 8/16/12 . chapter 24arg. i really wish this would continue. its an awesome story. |
joshlamont 5/8/12 . chapter 24That was utterly fantastic. I dearly hope you continue this someday. Until then, though, thank you for such a good story! |
donald7777 3/1/12 . chapter 24This has been a pretty amazing story so far. As you have stated it has been done before but not to this level. Following up on your authour notes I am glad to see that this will be a long story. So many stories end right around the 24-28 chapter marks. Its said. Any ways keep up the great work. I have faved your story. side note I Can See Clearly Now, man i remember reading this story way back. I can't believe that its still active woohoo. Please up date it soon. |