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catgrl106 2007-05-24 . chapter 4
Wow... Is he really going to do it? Is there anyway for Tsuzuki to come back and save the day? Or is Hisoka just going to end up killing himself as well? Please update soon!
cocoke5 2006-08-13 . chapter 4
love the story and i think that you are doing a good job on the story and i love the way hisoka mind is working and that i think that dr. muraki have tusk but i can not wait for next chapter of the story and more chapter of the story
Saphira112 2006-08-12 . chapter 4
Shoot Muraki, Hisoka! Shoot him! Go for it! *looks at author* u need to update! and are you gonna bring Tsuzuki back? Please do! Oh, wait... hold on... if Hisoak killed Muraki, his position as a shinigami would be forfeight. Aw, man! BUT UPDATE! QUICKLY!

-Saphira Nakare Ruakara
Amethyst-eyed Koneko 2006-08-11 . chapter 4
ARRGH!! I hate cliffhangers!! @_@ Don't say that this isn't getting anywhere. It most certainly is! It's just slowly building up to a (hopefully) intense climax!! The teasing is sheer torture!! GAH!! :D Oh, and I absolutely LOVED all the TsuSoka flashbacks!! *sniff* so sweet!! It just makes the loss of Tsuzuki that much more painful. I really hope that Watari and Tatsumi don't interfere with Hisoka. Muraki is SO asking for it!! GRR!! I hope Hisoka makes him suffer a lot before he kills him!!
Please please update soon!!
Koneko =^.^=
laustic 2006-08-11 . chapter 4
That was a wonderful chapter. And don't worry about the flashbacks. You don't have too much of them and besides I love reading about the moments Tsuzuki and Hisoka had shared.
Intoxicated 2006-08-11 . chapter 4
aw i hate cliffhangers *cries why? why?! why did authors invent cliffhangers...argh! RAWR! *slaps myself ... sorry about that...anyway...continue ne onegai...please..i like this fic...thanks
Yuka Hasumi 2006-07-28 . chapter 3
i was wondering when you were gonna continue this...

yay! please update soonER!
sarion 2006-07-27 . chapter 3
this is wonderfully written and PLEASE don't stop. and poor hisoka. don't stop
yaoi-hunter 2006-07-26 . chapter 3
wow, the story is great, i love it! poor hisoka, i just wish he could be happy u.u please update soon!
Kumachannanoda 2006-07-26 . chapter 3
Ah! You have to update! please! I love it!
laustic 2006-07-26 . chapter 3
Yay! An update. I always imagined that Hisoka would be a wreck if Tsuzuki died. Afterall, wouldn't we all be lost if our world went missing from us? I like how you're portraying Hisoka in this fic, he's so heartbreaking.
And that picture you're refering to is one of my favorite Tsu/His pics.
Launigsiae 2006-07-26 . chapter 3
Love your story, it sounds very real
Amethyst-eyed Koneko 2006-07-26 . chapter 3
I don't know if anyone else is reading this but everybody should! It's awesome! That Evanescence song is one of my faves! I love My Immortal! I never realized how well it fits with the Kyoto scene! wow! I must tell you that I was crying like a baby for most of this. Hisoka's agony was so real it was easy to empathize with him. It was very moving and well written. It's easy to imagine that Hisoka would react just like this if this had happened. I would have done the same had it been me. The pain of losing someone that important to you isn't something you can forget - ever. I wonder if after Hisoka kills Muraki (and I believe that he will) he will kill himself. He will find himself at a crossroads of sorts and it will be a hard choice to decide whether to live on without Tsuzuki or to follow his heart and go be with him. Mourning himself to death doesn't seem like much of an option. I think he just might end this existence and follow Tsuzuki. After all, happiness is a rare thing for shinigami so they have to cling to what little they do get, right? I guess I'll find out in the next chapter! :D
Update soon!
Koneko =^.^=
Crimson Hisuki 2006-05-25 . chapter 2
That was so sad! I'm crying! I hate character deaths! Darn it! Second deaths are even worse!... Keep it up! ^__^
Modified Tam 2006-05-24 . chapter 2
It was very good.
Sad, no not sad, but kinda painful. But still - i like it.
Update soon, will ya?
(Ps, how much chapter are you planning to continue?)
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