Holy fizzizzle... This is the best DMC fanfic I think I've ever read. Ever. Great job, just... wow.

Bloody Hell... That was SO brilliant! I love it.

Dude! This was awesome! I can't believe I didn't catch this fic until now.

Finally done reading! Whew. It was great and the story flowed very much like the game would, so congrats on that. It was a fun read.Bye!

I did feel, to be honest, as if Lady coming back was a means to an end, know what I mean? I got the slight reference, but what with it being such a long fic, I don't think everyone would have done. That's just my opinion and there is no need at all to follow it or whatever, this is your story and you know best after all.

I do like the way you've set things up for your next fic, which I shall soon get to reading.

I thank you from the bottom of my heart for writing such a roller coaster of a fic.

And yes, there's no way of sterilizing spelling mistakes so then they don't breed.

Shame, isn't it?

Change in length here. Very very expressive without even meaning to be. A longer chapter seems to represent the long lasting feud between the two brothers.

I felt that the inclusion of Doppleganger was a very very nice touch, but the irony of the last sentence was not lost upon me. For as far as I know, Lady is still somewhat...um...deceased.

(smiles) Exciting. Tremedously exciting. Nothing to critique here. nothing at all. I love the arguements and I find it worrying that I seem to be agreeing with Vergil for the most part!

ROSEBUD!

And HOW is THAT stylish?!?!

(coughs)

Mundus: (gasps out his last breath. And says his final word) ...Rose...bud...

Dante: ...(looks impressed at this "style")

well well, now to see Dante's reaction when he seeshis dead friend. She's not gone really though, right? Yellow orb time! Me be hoping!

There's something horrificly sad about the chapter, not just because of the fact that a certain someone dies, but there's just something heart-breaking about the description used. The metaphore of an hourglass...well...

truly heart-breaking stuff.

Great Story! Loved it all the way to the end!

(whistles, impressed)

And it seems like Dante has become the Dante of dmc2 again. Which I actually really liked.

(likes mature people. Don't take that to mean I'm attracted to old age pensioners because tbat is SO not what I mean)

Sometimes, when you write the sound-effects, it's a bit like I'm reading a verbal comic book! I'm not saying that as if it's a bad thing by the way!

Stupid Mundus, when will he learn that the boys NEVER really listen to him? Apart from Vergil but...well...there's a LOT of debate on that.

I personally like the idea that he joined him willingly, because he doesn't seem the type to be so weak-minded as to get brainwashed. XD

but meh, like I care what REALLY happened. (and it's not like Capcom will fill in the gaps) XD

Aha. Always had a feeling somehow in the game that Arkham would probably still live, despite getting a bullet to the head. He HAD harnessed the power of the devils after all, he couldn't have died SO easily, know what I mean?

ANYWAY...

Is vergil a fan of Elvis? (boogies) A little less conversation a little more action (sings)

Oh and now the action is REALLY hotting up!

I love the fact that Vergil's actions and behaviour and his dialogue seems so incongrous with the rest of the other characters. I love it because he IS incongrous, he IS refined and let's face it, Dante...well...isn't.

I can't think of any constructive criticsm to give you, but I do thank you for splitting this down into small little bitesize chapters on behalf of all the readers. ^_^

Just goes to show that a little package or a little chapter can ALWAYS pack a resounding punch.

I think I might start to try and decrease the length of my chapters, sometimes they're bordering on the verge of ridiculous!