Wow. For such a short piece, you crammed a lot of emotion in there. Everyone was incredibly in character, and I love how you incorporated the Dresspheres' magic. It's bittersweet and angsty, and just what I was looking for in a Paine/Yuna fic. In a word: Lovely.

Wow...this is breathtaking. You've described Paine accurately through Yuna's eyes. The little details and gestures are painted clearly, I just have to keep scrolling down until I realize that's the end(?) of the chapter. And the subtle tension between those two are well described. Please continue it!

This story was awesome! Actually, I read it twice. You did a very good job...

At first, I was a little bit sceptical about the pairing but my curiosity finally took over and I must admit I just loved it! You really made it seem plausible.

Good story. I hope to see another chapter, but that's up to you as author. *smile*

It was really well written ^_^ I liked how you ended it and how the story went... Really good :) Great job! :)

I like this one, It has its own special delicacy. Delcious! And I like how it all sort of leads to the end. Thanks!