   Duskblood 2008-03-09 . chapter 1This is really cute! I like Nova/Chiro mother/son relationships! Don't stop writing your other stories either! |
 You'veBeenJayed 2007-04-12 . chapter 1Aw...I love father/son moments with Chiro and Antari.And I like mother/son moments with Chiro and Nova. |
 Kittyfan12 2007-01-05 . chapter 1OMG! that was so sweet
I loved it and how chiro sees Nova and Antauri as his mom and dad
and the part when he says goodnight is absolutely adorable.
very very nice
-kira |
 quwira 2006-06-20 . chapter 1aw dats cute! |
 Jazzy Kat 2006-06-06 . chapter 1AWW! IT WAS SO CUTE! Lucky! I have to wait until I'm 19 before my parents let me get my license. 4 more years... x_O that sucks. |
 4Evermonkeyfan 2006-05-27 . chapter 1Great story! |
| ThieveingLegend 2006-05-27 . chapter 1 Neato! Nice story I agree with Nova's mother/son thing with Chiro but I'm still a Sprx/Nova person but others like Nova/Antauri And people say Anturi has a father/son thing with Chiro but the more I talk about it the mre confused I get HAHA! Okay I'm hyper keep up the good work. |
 Neko-Meeca 2006-05-25 . chapter 1Wow! That was good! I loved that! But Nova&Antauri are really like parents to Chiro. Well, keep up the good work! |
 The Sacred Heart 2 2006-05-24 . chapter 1Ah... It was so cute! But I must remind you that in a paragraph, only one person can talk and to have someone else talk, you must make a new paragraph or just let the dialog be all by itself.
Other than that, I liked it!
Well, see ya!
The Sacred Heart 2 |
| Dazja 2006-05-21 . chapter 1 IT'S TOO CUTE! *chokes and dies on the cuteness*
Adorable, and no real problems, sans the punctuation. |
| x-Ray-Ray-x 2006-05-21 . chapter 1 Truly moving, a mother/Sopn relationship, truly stunning-x |
 Layla Fairy 2006-05-21 . chapter 1AW CUTENESS! beutifly written well done. |
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