mind telling me why all your stories are about sex?

I HAVE POV'S! I HATE FIRST PERSON! becus of first person, i haven't read a decent book in ages.

Superb, the first Barti fanfic I read and I loved it. I found this with your link in your sigy on the Bartiforums =) Thanks for that! Im really glade to have found it. With 800 reviews it looks like its the best one on FF by far, Nice! Although thats kinda sad cause Id like to read other stories as long and good. And you are right saying Barti came naturally, you do Barti very well with the constant sarcasm lol. Lots of places I thought stood out :D. As for bad thoughts I had reading it, I thought Nat was a little to,idk mean at first and that there was to much of Barti being subservient with all that master shhtuff. And what do you mean your not gonna make any sequals or other barti fanfics with that kind of clossing? =( Oh well goodluck on your professional writings. <3 Bartimaeus, thanks again for the story

will you please write a "lemon" just for me with amanda and simon lovelace having sex?

Hmm, curious how Nat let Junior turn out like that. I, for one, don't believe it. But he'll turn out okay in the end, just like Nat. Like father, like son, eh?

That was wonderful! Bleh, I sounded like some old lady right now. Let me change that. That was awesome! Some parts seemed like they were a little too convenient for Nat, but other than that, it was good.

Killing Jane off as a Christmas gift? Santa must be so proud of you.

Hmm, now the hell-hole just got even worse. I can't wait to see how this story resolves and ends.

Wow, this certainly went from good to a hell-hole for Nat.

Holding back the urge to review is hard when your story is so good! I have a few things to say about this story. First of all, bad things first. I know people have probably said this a million times (and you have too) but the romance between Kitty and Nathaniel seems rushed. EVEN though it's rushed, it wasn't crappily rushed like some stories where they all of a sudden fall in love for no apparent reason. So what I'm saying is that the romance was skillfully rushed. If that even makes sense. But still, that's quite an accomplishment if I do say so myself. Second, some of this seems ripped off Star Wars. It's not a bad thing, but some other people might feel you're taking ideas that aren't yours. Now the good stuff! You got everyone's personality perfectly. Especially Bartimaues's. No grammar and/or spelling mistakes (at least I haven't noticed any, but I'm horrible at grammar). The humor is also quite amusing. I haven't had this much fun reading a story in a while!

I adore this chapter! You did a very nice job with Bartimaeus, very true to the books *nod of approval*

*gigglesnort* I enjoy the fact that the "only sensible option" is to kiss her to shut her up xD I am very much enjoying this story so far. You have lured my from deviantart to read this lovely fanfiction! My username there is MaryLilaWest74

Liked the story as a whole, one of my favorites on this site, however I think you made John/ Nathaniel too much of an arsehole in the middle that it became somewhat unbelievable that kitty would ever stay with him. And it made his return to good seem far too quick and again, lacked believability.

just a quicky. John is Information minister

Wow, I have to say that I'm amazed; your writing is simple but effective, and I would consider it very good, if not for the fact that English isn't your native language, which makes me think it's GREAT. Your beta is excellent, btw, and you have a very obvious style, but you still stayed true to the books. I'm not even a big Nathaniel/Kitty fan but I stuck through the entire story. Great job!