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| John 2008-08-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseLove it. -Sakhr-Al-Jinni |
| John 2008-08-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseAgain you have done it. Spactaculer imagination in this chapter as well. -Sakhr-Al-Jinni |
| John 2008-08-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI thought it is a very imaginative work, and i very much enjoied it. -Sakhr-Al-Jinni (Devart) |
| Anne l'Ineffable 2008-07-09 ch 25, anon. | abuseI completely enjoyed this fic. The girl who translates it in french is a friend of mine, made me discover your story, and I have to say that I'm a fan. I especially like the way you wrote Barty's thoughts - so him! The only details which bothered me are maybe the end (too.. happy) and Esther (too nice, too 'perfect mum'). Anyway, that's a story I'll remember. ;) (err... I don't know if I made any mistakes, but if I did, please forgive my bad english > |
| narnia freak 2008-07-08 ch 16, anon. | abusegreat story |
| Siddiqqaz 2008-07-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseSt. Brutus’s Secure Centre for Incurably Criminal Boys thats the harry potter ref |
| KennyC 2008-05-17 ch 1,  | abuseWow I loved this! I was do upset when Nathaniel died and this would make a great fourth book. Though I am a little confused. What happened between the two? Kitty's on the tower, Nathaniel's with Jane, I've got a lot of questions. Did I miss something before this one? A little clarification would be nice. I do love it though. I can't wait till the next chapter! |
| Bahzad 2008-05-04 ch 25, anon. | abuseFantastic job! I do wish that you would write more, but as you said, you have work, so I understand. Good luck with everything! |
| Strawberrylover 2008-03-23 ch 6, | abuseWow, Johnny boy is definitely a horny guy isn't he? If all answers fail him, screwing Jane is always the key. That seems to be implemented in his brain. And it's quite hilarious. hahaha i laugh a great deal when I read the ending on this chapter! :D |
| Strawberrylover 2008-03-23 ch 3, | abusehehehe another promise he carelessly made. you know what that means! Ol honny boy is definitely going to touch Kitty Mandrake! HAHAHHAHAHHAHAHA nice! |
| Strawberrylover 2008-03-23 ch 2, | abuseAha, so it comes out. I bet her eyes are going to bulge out or something. hahaha |
| Strawberrylover 2008-03-23 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is definitely going to be interesting. I just finished the third book and cried at the end. And I seriously was very depressed so I came onto in hopes of reviving myself with a good story from the trilogy. And good golly I think I found it! |
| HoshiToTsuki 2008-03-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseI love how you wrote the characters. I wanted to slap Ferrar so badly it's mad. Also... pleasE i beg you WHERE IS BARTIMAEUS! -perfect ur story, involve him!- |
| HoshiToTsuki 2008-03-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseahem hem hem -clears throat and breaths in extremely deeply- WHERE'S BARTIMAEUS?!?!?!?!! that is all. besides that your writing is very good and i like this story a lot. |
| romance-addict44 2008-03-04 ch 25, | abuseThe ending was great! |