I liked it! I espicaly liked the Drop, Rush and Pitter Patter.

I've written and read alot of poetry in my life, and I have to say yours is simplistic (which isn't a bad thing) and very moving. There is a decided air of emotion invested in this short piece.

I'd like to know what inspired you to write it, something about the piece screams 'significance'

This poem is one of the lovliest, simplest, and most haunting ones I have ever read on this site. Well done indeed. You have a gift for capturing an image.