 Cody Thomas 2007-01-13 . chapter 10Yes, my dear, the fic is just fine. I really liked it too. (Hence the bit about me reviewing.) I wonder why Jou just doesn't go with him so he doesn't have to go through the heartbreak, I don't think Seto would really mind.
One small thing that just didn't seem to flow, (Because I'm anal like that,) was: "The notes were all posted in the order Seto had left them. Under each posted note was a rose in a vase. Some were in full bloom, others still closed."
If Seto gives him one rose for every time he goes away and is gone for approximately a week or longer, then may stay for a few weeks or a month before leaving again, and Jou had kept every rose he's ever received to the point the room is filled with them, then how are they all still fresh? Cut flowers normally only last a week and a half, to two weeks at best, and that's if you are pampering the heck out of them. Unless the flowers have been preserved or dried and I just didn't catch it?
Sorry, for the ramble, my mind picks up on the weirdest things at times and just runs with it. I really really liked your story, this was the only inconsistency I really saw. I hope for more of your work again soon. |
 koolmint26 2007-01-12 . chapter 10omg i remember reading this now, I remember this chapter |
 koolmint26 2007-01-12 . chapter 9omg no he has to go for it...i'm so bad i read this chapter first lol i'll go read the rest i promise!! |
 luvanime4life 2007-01-10 . chapter 10SQUE! KAWAII NE! (heart-eyed) So beautiful! XD |
 luvanime4life 2007-01-10 . chapter 9It's been so long since you last updated! YAY! Your back tho'! That was hot...really really hot! O.O LEMON! XD I sense a lemon under way! WOOT!! GReat FiC./ ChApPiE. Keep up the great work! XD |
 Anime WarriorSkye 2007-01-08 . chapter 10Both were good. Wasn't this chapter a repost? And as for 9 being slightly based off of true events...*raises eyebrow* You don't have to tell me, but I am curious, Dammira and I won't betray your trust. |
 youkai_no_hane 2006-12-27 . chapter 9 ahh and it wa based on a true story, i sould know for i was there
ANYWAYS! so cute!! =^~^= i loved it, and of cours, i love u (not that knd of way tho), or do i?? the world will never know ^~^ ... lmao |
 Miriku-'-'-Yami no Hikari 2006-10-11 . chapter 8*dies* Evil--computer--crashing--*twitch twitch*
Kimiru: o.O;; *edges away*
Me: HAH! Yami got mad! AND THEY FELL IN LOVE ANYWAY! YAAY!! |
 kingleby 2006-09-22 . chapter 8cute ^_^ i like how you added yami's possessive side as well. |
 kingleby 2006-09-22 . chapter 6sweet ^_^ love ryou's character. |
 kingleby 2006-09-22 . chapter 5whoa, that was such a cool idea! ^_^ i love it. i actually saw a film that was like that once, but this was wau better! ^_^
p.s. sorry haven't revieweed till now, had computer trouble. |
 Vuurvlieg 2006-08-31 . chapter 8I LOVE these oneshots :D please write a whole lot more :D:D:D |
 Cody Thomas 2006-08-28 . chapter 8Okay i have just spent the better part of two hours reading all of these and I have only one thing to say...When's the next installment? These are really REALLY good and they aren't all sweet happy cotton candy fluff, so I would really, truly enjoy more. I am adding you to my alerts so I'll have first dibs on the next piece. Until next time, Ja' ne! |
 youkai no hane 2006-08-08 . chapter 3AW! SO CUTE! |
 Anime WarriorSkye 2006-08-06 . chapter 8Sorry it took so long, I was on vacation. Wonderful oneshots you have there. |