This is just... beautiful. I love it.

I want more Ryro stories/one-shots from you!

This was cute.

...sniff... that was beautiful...i just love roguepyro stories, roguebobby are cute too but i think pyrorogue is better

that was so great please write more!

Fantastic...read it once, and had to reread. Very impressed, will look forward to more stories in this ship!

Gosh, this is really, really good! I loved the pacing. I loved all of it. RyRo is forever.

Who cares about power mistakes,

Excelent story,

Good writing,

Better than most

*sniff* That was so beautiful. Bravo. Bravo. CC scale gives it two thumbs up. I enjoyed it a lot. I hope to see more of your writing soon.

Sincerely,

C.C.

OMG. Loved it. (Freyja from Fanforum here) I would totally love a sequel (so we could see the aftermath of all this, you know, a jealous Bobby and so on ;) Would totally rock) Would love if you could write more fics :D

This is such an awesome story, you should think about doing more chapters..

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so sweet and so subtle. loved it. keep up the good work and i hope to read more soon

Perfect is the only word I can think to describe this. I could just *feel* every moment, words weren't needed. Very sensual and passionate, but as Carla-p said, still innocent. I really hope you write more fics in the future.

Wow -this was brilliant - it was poweful writing, innocently written and yet full of erotic promise - at least that's how it seemed to me, what they did was so powerful and intense. I loved this! x

that was really good, personnally i'm hard pushed not to come to your door and pound on it to ask whats next! lol u shud definately write more ryro stuff its brilliant!

I love this story please update.