This story was funny as hell. please write more.

Interesting concept, but lacking. Needs more wizards, moblins, Ganondorf, princesses, etc. Navi in place of the llama is a nice, if not aggressively weird, touch.

Though in need of another coat of paint, this is a decent start.

Well, Stick, I must say you have a REALLY good idea here. However, if you want to make it truly enjoyable, follow these tips.

~Differentiate it from the movie. Right now it's basically Napolean Dynamite with Link's name changed.

~Use other supporting charecters from Zelda to fill out the rest of the cast. Example: Darunia = Bully. Saria = Nerdy girl from school.

~Lengthen the chapter a bit. Just a bit.

~Switch around AND add some quotes. That will make it feel like less of a rip-off.

~PARAGRAPH IT! This is the story's biggest flaw. It would have been much more enjoyable if you followed basic dialogue perimiters.

If I were you, I would fix this chapter and re-upload it. I think you might really have something here.

Can't *laughs* stop *laughs* Laughing! *fit of laughter*

okey dokey then ... *opens mouth about to say something then stops* ... *backs away slowly* ... funny but ... no more sour skittles for you (but it is really funny ;) )