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dreamer128956 2008-12-26 . chapter 1
Rubber chickens? Pepper tea? Fisher Price tools? Mikey, Mike, Michelangelo? Awsomely funny! Loved those lines and little details so much!
Jessie07 2008-05-28 . chapter 1
Aww, cute story!!
Gohanzgirl 2007-05-17 . chapter 1
Cute! I liked it!
Jaganashi 2006-08-25 . chapter 1
Aww...very cute.

I love the idea of Mikey putting fisher price tools in Don't toolbox.
Green Leap 2006-07-21 . chapter 1
This was adorable. Nice job!
TigerChickTigriss 2006-07-17 . chapter 1
I liked how you wrote this. And, now that I think about it, that IS probably how it's like for them...

TCT
mac 2006-06-07 . chapter 1
this is great i love it.
Ice Dagger 2006-06-01 . chapter 1
Cute little story. Though I'm a little surious why he's on the midnight subway. I liked all the flashbacks. Well done.
Maiden of the Undead 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
Very nice!i love it !
greshunkai 2006-05-22 . chapter 1
Cute! but very well written, much enjoyed. thank you.I think you got M. spot-on!(good characterization) Fisher Price (toy) tools was a master stroke & I always giggle at rubber chickens.
Dory's human replica 2006-05-22 . chapter 1
Wow, that's really scary - I love the little flashback things as each thing is suggested! I bet that girl had no idea just how different their lives are even though they're totally parallel...the thing about the ear piercings/stabbing was really clever too! Great story! And pepper flavoured tea? Yuck!
Liz-Kaguya 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
That was Pretty Damn Funny! It gave me a laugh, thanks.
Liz & Kaguya
Askre 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Great story, and yes sometimes it does look like their life isn't that different.

good job :-)
pacphys 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Ooh! Awesome!! That's a great little conversation, interlaced with memories like that! Terrific little take here, LG! *adds to C2*
Cheers,
~pacphys~
Linchi 2006-05-21 . chapter 1
Aw! Kawaii!
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