 dreamer128956 2008-12-26 . chapter 1Rubber chickens? Pepper tea? Fisher Price tools? Mikey, Mike, Michelangelo? Awsomely funny! Loved those lines and little details so much! |
 Jessie07 2008-05-28 . chapter 1Aww, cute story!! |
 Gohanzgirl 2007-05-17 . chapter 1Cute! I liked it! |
 Jaganashi 2006-08-25 . chapter 1Aww...very cute.
I love the idea of Mikey putting fisher price tools in Don't toolbox. |
 Green Leap 2006-07-21 . chapter 1This was adorable. Nice job! |
 TigerChickTigriss 2006-07-17 . chapter 1I liked how you wrote this. And, now that I think about it, that IS probably how it's like for them...
TCT |
 mac 2006-06-07 . chapter 1 this is great i love it. |
 Ice Dagger 2006-06-01 . chapter 1Cute little story. Though I'm a little surious why he's on the midnight subway. I liked all the flashbacks. Well done. |
 Maiden of the Undead 2006-05-27 . chapter 1Very nice!i love it ! |
 greshunkai 2006-05-22 . chapter 1Cute! but very well written, much enjoyed. thank you.I think you got M. spot-on!(good characterization) Fisher Price (toy) tools was a master stroke & I always giggle at rubber chickens. |
 Dory's human replica 2006-05-22 . chapter 1Wow, that's really scary - I love the little flashback things as each thing is suggested! I bet that girl had no idea just how different their lives are even though they're totally parallel...the thing about the ear piercings/stabbing was really clever too! Great story! And pepper flavoured tea? Yuck! |
 Liz-Kaguya 2006-05-21 . chapter 1That was Pretty Damn Funny! It gave me a laugh, thanks.
Liz & Kaguya |
 Askre 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Great story, and yes sometimes it does look like their life isn't that different.
good job :-) |
 pacphys 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Ooh! Awesome!! That's a great little conversation, interlaced with memories like that! Terrific little take here, LG! *adds to C2*
Cheers,
~pacphys~ |
 Linchi 2006-05-21 . chapter 1Aw! Kawaii! |