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Diving Blue
2009-07-23 . chapter 5
Weebee you madman youv'e got me hooked!! Your stories, all of them, theyr'e wonderful; its like a drug, your the grower, is the dealer, and I'm the hapless addict. You officially have a fan now. Love the story so far, and looking forward to more.
Digital Dragon Productions
2009-07-20 . chapter 9
Excellent. Ranma's fight with Gouki on school grounds. Even though all the students emptied the yard when the fight started. I'd imagine that a good portion still watched from windows and such. There are two interesting possibilities.

1.
Parents hear of how students were attacked by a mad man and he needed to be decapitated to be stopped. They pull their kids out of the school and the school is desperate to cover it so much that Ranma is reinstated as being part of the event.

2. The girl that Ranma saved during the fight wants to thank him and investigates. She finds out his name and then tries to look up his home room. Finds that he was expelled for fighting on that day. hm. . . she is either has an a parent with connections or better yet .. forms the get Ranma back in school fan club. (Of course either Ranma has no idea or if he does says not to bother since he doesn't want to go anyway and she insists even more that her senpai to whom She looks up to him with brotherly affections. .
Maybe she enlist Keiko's help (who is stunned when she hears of the club from the flyers) to get him into another school.

Then again that would be pretty far from the YYH story, but it would be pretty funny if he comes back from an YYH adventure and all that had happened while he was gone!

keep up the good work.
Cat on a Shtick
2009-06-28 . chapter 9
Another weebee masterpiece. I just hope you write as much as you can. period.
FantomoDrako
2009-06-25 . chapter 9
Yay, new chapter!

Ewamoto's a jerk, but I like how you had Ranma take the wind out of his sails. Nicely done.

Keep up the great work! I'll be eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

~Fantomo
ranma girl 14
2009-06-22 . chapter 9
Great chapter, can't wait to see them go for the mirror. ^_^
Dragon Man 180
2009-06-19 . chapter 9
Nice chapter, everyone seems perfectly in character. Ewamoto needs some major humiliation! I suggest if Ranma reads Naruto he pulls of a 10 Years of Death.
Wonderbee31
2009-06-19 . chapter 9
Can't wait to see what happens with Ranma and Kurama now when they both try for the mirror, and the outcome of that adventure.
OBSERVER01
2009-06-19 . chapter 9
that teacher gives teaches a bad name,pound him!
Dumbledork
2009-06-19 . chapter 9
Hoho. Good one. Can't wait for more.
Chaos_Lord_of_Freaks
2009-06-07 . chapter 8
Dude I Love this story! I can't wait til the next chapter's out! And I like Kuwabara too, he kinda reminds me of what Ryouga might be like if he'd stop pullin dishonorable crap on Ranma all the time and got over his obsessions.
Phnxfyr1
2009-05-24 . chapter 8
Can't wait for more
yellulhchicken
2009-05-08 . chapter 8
this is a really good story. sad that it does not seem that you are going to continue this
Sexy Neko Hibiki
2009-04-26 . chapter 8
PLEASE UPDATE THIS FIC SOON!
peppymint
2009-04-19 . chapter 8
Hiei won't be happy when he finds out how easily Ranma can track him. Oh well, that's his problem. I admit I am curious about Ranma's reaction to Kurama being a demon. But hopefully he won't have a problem with it.
therandomthinker
2009-04-15 . chapter 8
Hi!
Love this fic so far! I like your humour, and you've kept the characters in character. Although I would've thought the Ranma/Kurama would have wanted to get some sort of DNA test done to confirm their suspicions.
Does Hiei want to get Ranma in trouble? I notice Ryoga's on his way to being included in the fic. Will there be any other characters from Ranma in this fic?

Keep up the good work!
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